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Review:Niclovegood says:
This is so beautiful, I feel like I want Hermionie to run for it.

I feel bad for Hermionie, if Draco had of stayed would she have ran with him? What was Draco thinking when he left her?.

Your details in this story are remarkable, you fit in the most delecate yet effective of words and phrases.

How you worked in the diamonds was lovely; her ring, the water and the metaphor.

"This is not the day she escapes. This is not the day she gives up.This is another day in the in-between, another day she runs without moving at all." These last two lines are so well writen and a very nice, dramatic way to finish.

Beautiful writing, keep going :D

Author's Response: I wanted her to run for it too, but I'm a mean mean person XD

Thank you so much for the lovely review! It really made my day, and I'm so glad you liked the way I incorporated the diamonds in -- that was the biggest challenge for me, so I'm thrilled that it worked out.

Thanks for the review and for reading, love xx

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