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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Okay this is a bit of a side note, but reading this has made me really interested to read a story about how Sirius and Peter faced off that night, when Sirius supposedly killed Peter. Anyway, on to more important matters: your story!

This is the first piece I've ever read about Sirius' imprisonment, (so you get major points for originality) and I think it shows a great insight into what must have been going on in his mind during his undeserved time in Azkaban. I think that his memories and the knowledge that he was innocent WERE the things that kept him sane while he was in Azkaban, so I think it's great that you highlighted those things and mentioned that here.

I think everything flowed pretty well. There were some grammar and spelling errors that were a little distracting at times, but they didn't really affect my overall understanding of the piece and I'm sure they could be cleared up with a good proofread! Perhaps a beta could help, if you don't already have one!

Either way, this was a very interesting and original read! Good job! 7/10

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