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Review:The Misfit says:
Hello! I'm here for the review swap! XD

I really quite like this story! Ivy is an adorable child! I'm curious now as to how her situation turns from that three-year-old on her first day at nursery to the seventeen-year-old in the position that you describe in the first four characters of this fanfiction! :)

I love Ivy's obsession with being a princess; it's quite fun to see how she behaves! I'm also desperate to know if the little boy is James or Albus! XD

Just a tiny little bit of nitpicking: assuming Ivy is in England, considering she lives in Godric's Hollow, she would refer to it as nursery or daycare. Kindergarten isn't a phrase we Brits use.

Overall, this is a really good and intriguing first chapter. Absolutely lovely! :D

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