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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
Hello :) I actually really enjoyed this. It was an excellent start, I liked how she started telling us a story, it allowed us to learn more about the character. It was different. I am interested in what is going to happen and how things get to the state Ivy described in the first paragraph. And in talking about the first paragraph, it really made me interested into the whole story and made me want to continue on, which is kudos to you. You're also an excellent writer. I love your choice of words and style. Your prose is excellent. Ivy also seems like an really interesting character so far, even though we don't know that much about her.

One thing though, if Ivy is British, she wouldn't call it Kindergarden. It's Nursery (3-4). Kindergarden isn't a term used here. Just something I picked up on :)

In all, this was a excellent start.

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