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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Well, this sure captured my attention! I was mainly only going to be reviewing One-shots for the review swap but your summary caught my eye and I just had to check it out (:

I really like Kiwi; She's so cute :p The way she keeps telling herself how she hates Oliver (which I can see right through) is definitely a sign that she likes him! I also like her inner monologue. Shes funny and I like that :D

I liked how you introduced all of the characters. It all fit in rather nicely and didn't overlap at all. Cat and Kiwi see to be very close and I liked the way that Kiwi told the reader exactly how Cat is, not caring about stepping on a few toes by saying that shes basically a devil in the morning :p That's definitely how I'd describe my best friend and by her being my best friend, wouldn't expect me to explain her in any other way! lol.

The part involving Crystal seemed to confuse me a little bit. How come they hate her so much? Is there a real defining thing that she does to Cat and Kiwi that I will find out in later chapters?

And now, onto Oliver :) I can already tell I'm going to be fangirling over your Oliver as I continue reading! He seems like a sweet, Quidditch obsessed guy who doesn't care what people think and I already like that about him :D

I loved the ending when Kiwi attacked Oliver! That part had me laughing and I could totally see it happening :p The fact that she transformed without even trying was really interesting. I feel like a lot of other Anamagi would end up doing that too and it could definitely get them into some trouble!

All in all, I really liked this and I'm excited to read more! :)

have a good day, and keep writing! xxx


Author's Response: First of all, I'd like to tell you that I'm extremely flattered :)

Yes, Kiwi is a bit oblivious and completely unconvincing when it comes to Oliver, isn't she? We'll let her hold on to her (crumbling) beliefs for the time being.

I'm glad you manage to identify to Cat and Kiwi's friendship -- personally, it's one of my favourite parts of writing this!

Crystal was originally part of a bigger subplot, that I chose not to include, so no, there is no defining thing, not anymore.

OLIVER &hearts Nothing more to say.

Thank you for the review! :)

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