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Review:VickyAlice139 says:
Was so excited to find another chapter of this story up. I just love Sekhmet! Loved the chapter only complaint would have to be things seemed a bit rushed. Can't wait to read what will happen next. Will the twins be attending the World Cup? Is this story going to be following the storyline from the books but from a different point of view or will the twins create there own trouble?


Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait for the chapter and good news another should be up soon!

I had bit of trouble with this chapter. There is not a lot in between the events so timing each event in the story was a bit of a balancing act. I may edit this chapter later on down the road. Hopefully that will take out the rushed feeling.

We are planning on following the story line all the way to the end, but more from the twins point of view. How we are going to do that you will just have to wait and see!

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