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Review:peanuts11 says:
I really like this story. I'm typically someone who likes angst and drama so I really like the normal start of year descriptions and the establishing of friendships. I like Ava as a character but I haven't fully figured out her character. She's quite cheeky and seems lovely. I'll hope you'll develop James further in later chapters.
I also think that you need to work on descriptions of the setting to extend the scenes.
But you are a fantastic writer so I can't wait to see Ava complete her list. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much :-) Yeah, descriptions of settings is something I'm working on. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review!

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