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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hey there!

Another amazing story, as usual! :D When I sit down to read something you've written I feel like I'm about to go on a very fun trip.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot, mainly because it had to do with law and court related issues (professional habit I'm afraid).

Hermione's surrounding, her job, the Order of Veterans, her work alongside her nephew, they all come together beautifully and create a world that could very well be taken right out of the books themselves. Her attitude towards Greyback, as told through the eyes of young Albus also offered a unique perspective on the different aspects that this one character can incorporate. We have the Hermione that fights for the rights of those that are considered outcasts by the magical community yet she goes to great lenghts to ensure that one of these outcasts doesn't get the prefferential treatment she wished for others.

This is going straight to my favorites list, I can hardly wait to see what tricks she has up her sleeve in the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi, there! I'm always up for a fun trip. And I'm glad you enjoy reading the things I write. It makes me happy. :)

For some reason, I get an odd thrill out of writing courtroom scenes. I don't know whether it's something subconscious on my part of what, because I don't work in the legal arena.

You're making me grin uncontrollably here! I love writing as close to canon as possible. I did think that Albus offered a very unique perspective for this. He's grown up with both his aunt's idealism and his father's career in law enforcement, so in a sense he's seen both sides of the coin. But he also grew up in a world that knew nothing but peace and safety, so he can't really appreciate the danger posed by someone like Greyback.

Wow. I'm so pleased that you liked it. The next chapter is mostly written and I'm doing some editing and pondering over one particularly plot point. I'll probably post it over the weekend or early next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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