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Review:spreaddapoo says:
Hello~ Awesome that you updated so quickly. Back in the day, I made a terrible writer 'cause it took me months to write the next chapter. :) And, there's no point being a writer, no matter how good you are, if you don't get the story moving...

Thanks for the replies on the reviews I left! I was wonderfully surprised and grateful for them. I don't want you to think that I completely hate Rose or the story; I'm still here, aren't I? ;)

Regarding this chapter, you captured Albus as the Quidditch Captain really well - you can imagine him all fired up, ordering everyone about. :) I especially liked Dominique's letter; you also created that foreign, friendly atmosphere really well.

There are a few spelling errors and stuff, but nothing too major. I'm having a slightly hard time picturing Scorpius with the voice he's using, but I like his characterisation a lot and I think I'll get used to it after a while. :)

Anyway, thanks for the good read and I look forward to the next chapter. Don't lose hope and keep writing!

Author's Response: Hello spreaddapoo,

Thank you and I'm so sorry it has been a while since I updated this time, I had a bit of trouble with the validation but it should hopefully be up in a day or two.

No problem, I try to respond to all my reviews as quickly as possible (clearly I have not been so successful this time but personal life interferred a little). I'm glad you do not hate Rose or the story and thanks for sticking with it!

Oh Albus, he is rather fun to write, especially as he is so different from Rose. He is a bit of a Quidditch General. I'm glad you like Dominique's letter, I wanted to get a slightly bigger picture of the Weasley family, most of whom have already left Hogwarts, and this seemed like a good way to do it. Dominique may become a more important figure as the story goes on.

I shall eventually go back and edit all my chapters to rid them of spelling errors and the like but currently I am more focued on writing the story. Hopefully in the next chapter, you will get a greater insight into Scorpius' character but currently he is supposed to be a little bit vague.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I hope you come back to read more. I am so sorry about the delay in the update and I hope to update more frequently in the future. Thanks again and do not worry, this story is far from completion!

Irish Myth.

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