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Review:VickyAlice139 says:
I started reading this story around chapter fifty and have been eagerly awaiting each chapter since. I really am a terrible reviewer and tend to wait until the end of a story to review. I have to say this story was pretty amazing.

I don't really read NextGen fics, in fact this was the first one I did read. The summary drew me in and each chapter tightened the ropes that bound me to this story.

Each character was really well portrayed so that they seem really. I have often forgotten that Avery is an OC. Your a great writer. This story has never ever gotten boring.

I love James relationship with his siblings, Its so real. I love how he made Lily captain. I feel it showed how much he had grown through out the story. From being overly protective of his little sister. To finally seeing her as and actually person who can take care of her self and knows what she wants.

This has to be the longest review I've ever written, but this story deserves it. Thank you for making me at least give NextGen fictions a chance.

Can't wait for the sequel. I don't doubt that it will live up to the expectations this story has set.

Don't stop writing...


Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking around! I really appreciate you reading it. And giving Next Gen a shot. I was the same way actually. Completely uninterested until I found one story that got me thinking... mostly because I didn't like its portrayal of James. So started BTQC.

I'm glad you enjoyed James' growth. To me, that was so important in the story. Where he was to who he became. He really grew up in these 54 chapters and discovered a lot about himself.

Thank you so much for the review! I hope you enjoy the sequel! I have a lot of things planned for it and plenty more James +co.

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