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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello Jane! This one-shot was really, really great! I loved it! Severus has so much death to him, and even with everything JKR tells us about him, there is always more that we can figure for ourselves, and sink our teeth into. I think this one-shot was an excellent example of that. You got even deeper and more personal into Severus's love for Lily, and how it affected his entire life, on a level that is purely emotion and soul. I really think that this is all about Severus and Lily, because even when James is brought into the story, it is only because it causes such a strong emotional reaction in Severus. Also, I think the fact that Harry is never mentioned makes it feel much more internal. I really loved this, and I think you did a fabulous job with it! Also, CONGRATULATIONS FOR WINNING A DOBBY! You most definitely deserve it! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Cassie! ♥ I'm so, so sorry about how long it's taken me to respond to this review... and I really have no honest excuse for why that is. Nevertheless, I'm here now, and still just continually blown away at how AWESOME of a reviewer you are!

Severus is (as I'm sure you've noticed) one of my favorite characters to try and tackle, and I do so pretty often. I just love writing about him, you know? I love thinking about Snape/Lily in more realistic -- and hence unrequited -- fashion, and exploring the emotional consequences of his extreme devotion towards her, despite her death. You're very right: James is merely mentioned here. The rest is all very much solely Snape/Lily.

I am smiling in the middle of government class, re-reading this review. :3 Thank you for your congratulations, too -- I'm so honored to have won another Dobby this year! ♥ You are wonderful. And I'm sincerely hoping to see you back across my page quite soon!

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