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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Hi, I've thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of this story. The pacing was good without any lag, so it really held my interest. The scenes kept nicely to the story line without unnecessary wandering in all the chapters. I particularly liked this chapter - it had just the right feeling of tension, the descriptions were vivid, the characterizations were very good for everyone, and it had a nice ending that left me feeling satisfied if you wanted to end the story here.

Whether to continue? Well, I think that depends less on the opinions of your readers and more on whether YOU feel inspired to take it further. The story would not suffer either way in my opinion. If you're torn, you can always start something new and come back to this. But it's up to you and what your muse urges you to do. Anyway, you've done a great job with this. I've enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm really glad to know that you enjoyed it. I was able to pace this story a lot faster than Conspiracy of Blood because all of the back story is known. There was no need to stop and fill in the gaps. That was pretty enjoyable, actually, just to be able to tell a story without worrying about whether readers would know who any of the players were.

It's hard to say what I'm going to do. There are opinions on both sides. At a minimum, I think this story is taking a hiatus. I hate to do that, but there are other things I feel like working on, instead. If the muse comes back, I can hop right back onto it.

Thanks so much for taking a moment to review!

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