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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay, first of all something out the crickets just really disgusts me and creeps me out. The entire situation with the four of the Death Eaters creeps me out in a - half of you are so dumb that you're dangerous, one of you is smart enough to be more dangerous - then Snape just really makes me feel the difference between all of them.

I really liked the beginning with Karkaroff and Netterheim. It was such a stressful game they were playing, each making a move and waiting to call the others bluff. It was really well written and absolutely captivated me.

I love Dorcas. I want to hug her. I don't even want to read anymore because I don't want anything bad to happen to her, ever ;(.

Sorry it's taken me ages to get to the next chapter, stupid RL! But I'm so happy I finally made it back because this was an incredible one!

Author's Response: Hi there! Welcome back!

I suppose that if you weren't halfway creeped out by the crickets, I'd have to worry about you. It was meant to be creepy, so I guess I did it right. ;)

Netterheim was my favorite OC in this story! I'm glad you liked the back and forth between him and Karkaroff. And I'm doubly pleased you are getting along with Dorcas. Sometimes, she came off to me as too headstrong with not enough sense, but that's what the story dictated so I had to run with it. She does what she thinks is right, which is all we can ask of anybody.

Thanks so much for coming to visit! Don't feel guilty about RL. It happens all the time. Dorcas will be here when you get another breather. :)

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