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Review:Shortie says:
First ever fanfic? This is AMAZING! The plot, grammar, vocabulary! Everything is just impeccable. Sure you edited but the plot and idea is just marvelous. I'll get down to that.

Grammar is amazing. I didn't find any mistakes at all. I love your choice of words, how from a little paragraph you've said a lot about what happened with the Imperius Curse and all. I mean, even if the whole incident was written, it wouldn't have been artistic as this so yay you!

Plotline is stunning. I love the way you've taken a few minutes of Jame's life and turned it to a story of a lifetime. Not literally of course but you get what I mean.

Characterization is flawless. I guess I could say that. Yes it was flawlessly done.

My favourite quote is "Best of both" which is very VERY true.

the last line heightens the quality of the story more. This story is just amazing.


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