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Review:manno_malfoy says:
I'm speechless! Honestly, this was so beautiful that I need a moment or two to absorb how someone could write something so skillfully!

First of all, the way you've chosen to write the story -the two varying perspectives, I don't know how you managed to pull it of with making it confusing! It seemed to flow so easily from one paragraph to the next and the elegance with which you've composed each sentence always kept me wondering what other marvelling comparison you're going to make next.

I also admire the way you've incorporated the prompts! They're dispersed all over the story and almost hidden by how natural they seem to be among the rest of the words. At some point, I began to not notice their presence and just focus on the story and the descriptions!

I love the way you've 'personified' the events of her life -especially the Chinese Fireball. That was the first one to emerge and it was so beautiful and witty, it took me by surprise.

"Sixteen is too young to feel like a widow"
This line! It's such a special way to describe the grief that Cho felt after Cedric's death -one that is addressed in many of the entries, but never like this! It is just so strong and bold and absolutely brilliant!

And then she turned into a dragon! I'm not sure if that's meant figuratively or literally but I don't think that affects how wonderful that bit is. The way she feels that she's special, that despite everything she's lost, she's still worth a lot... Just simply wonderful!

I really envy your ability to write like this! This story is just amazing and makes me sure that I need to check out more of your stories like I had been planning to do for a while! Marvellous, marvellous job!


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