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Review:WinterFirefly says:
Yay! Just when I thought this story would get abandoned, you updated! :D

I love this story so much. Everything fits into place and itís so well written that you can see the relationship between two people just by reading one chapter! Itís really sad that Melody is dying but I guess she has to because James is meant to be with Lily. But still (you might hate me for saying this) after reading this story I actually like Melody more than Lily. :p

I really hope James has found out about her illness in the next episode because now theyíll just have a huge fight and confess their true feelings and all that fluffy stuff =) and I know the next few chapters should be about James/Lily but I hope the next chapter will contain a few more James/Melody moments? There havenít been any for so long and they clearly still care about each other xD

PLEASE update sooon! And donít wait a month Ė maybe next week? Or tomorrow? ;)

Canít wait for the next update! :D 10/10

Author's Response: No abandoning this story, I can promise you that! :)

Thank you so much! You have no idea how much I enjoy hearing nice things about my writing and my plots! Yes it is definitely sad and I won't enjoy killing her off, I'll tell you that.

I don't hate you- I might want to throw something at you, but I don't hate you ;) kidding! I have to admit, it's hard sometimes to write Lily and James because I love Melody, but once I get into the groove of writing them, Lily just captures my heart.

James may or may not have found out, I guess you'll simply have to read the next chapter to find out. As for more James and Melody moments, I will say that there will be some kind of a moment. A little nugget there until it's out. ;)

I will update soon, I can't promise this week as the queue is closed and I still do have some other stories to update, but next chapter has been written and only needs to be edited. So won't be too long! Promise!

Thank you again! I look forward to hearing from you soon!


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