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Review:CherryBoom says:
Fred and George are so cute. =) I really liked the idea of telling us how each one of the boys used magic the very first time. There was a really nice homey feeling in this chapter.

Writing was smooth, although I was bit perplexed about the delivery men before you explained it to us. They were muggles delivering magical items?

I enjoyed dialogue, it was very age appropriate. The characters were nicely done, although I would have loved to read more about young Bill and Charlie, but that's my personal preference.

Loved it and will read the next chapter as well. Good job! =)

Author's Response:


The delivery men weren't really Muggles, but they had to deliver the beds without using magic, since it was a "magic resistant" item... if that makes sense.

Haha! If I ever write a young BIll and Charlie story, I'll let you know.

Thanks for the review!

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