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Review:Ashling586 says:
I really liked this chapter. I was able to get more of an impression of the type of relationship that is between Jane and Remus. I will admit that I found it weird that James' parents were so old. Maybe it is due to the fact that my family all married and had children by the time they hit their mid twenties.
I liked the idea behind Jane confessing her mission to someone, but I wish I knew more about Reagan to understand why she was able to trust her and not someone else. I also wish I knew more about why she was so anxious the next morning. If she trusted Reagan so much why would she be so anxious.
You have catch my attention and now I just have to see what the next chapter is going to bring next. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

Author's Response: Oh, I doubt that it's just your family - 80 is quite old to have a kid in any family in the real world, especially for a woman! But since James's parents were supposed to have had him late, and late by wizarding standards is different than by Muggle standards, I felt like I needed to not make them 30 or even 40. I would have made them about 60 - which is certainly old for Muggles - except that they're supposed to have been elderly when they died, and from the books it doesn't seem like 80 is particularly old. It feels weird for me to write, too, though!

I'll add in some about Reagan when I get the chance - Reagan is one of Jane's cousins, and they were pretty close growing up.

Thank you so much for your review!

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