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Review:Basema says:
This fanfiction is an absolute piece of rubbish. My 11 year old sister writes better than you. I have three main problems with this story. One, this 'Melodie' character is a COMPLETE Mary-Sue. Secondly, Skiving Snack Boxes were created in Harry's time. And finally, it's the fact that you have a TERRIBLE need for a beta reader. It will honestly do you wonders. My honest opinion? Take this horrible story off of the Internet.

Author's Response: Hahaha this review really made me laugh! Thank you for your review though, the fact that you took the time out of your life to sit and read at least three chapters and leave a review means I must have done something right, no? :)

Your eleven year old sister probably does write better than me, I'm not denying it. I never proclaimed myself to be a renowned author after all. I'm just a fan, putting some ideas out there, building on a story so many people enjoy!

I'm sorry, but I must say, you could have at least spelled the name correctly, it is after all, the title. By the way, I don't think I've ever mentioned skiving snack boxes in this story, but I am sorry you took such offense to it. I'm sure J.K Rowling will forgive even such a terrible mistake. I truly hope you don't lose sleep over this.

Also, I'm embarrassed to admit I have no idea who this 'Mary-Sue' character is.

Your honest opinion is much appreciated. After all, criticism is good! Tell you what, I'll take this 'horrible story' off the internet when you write a review as a logged in member, it's only fair that I compare my mediocre story to your wonderful masterpieces.

Thank you again. I'd tell you to keep reading, but, well...


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