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Review:Courtney says:
I think your story is interesting and different, but it seems to me with the prologue and the focus on James/Melody that you are almost implying that James really loved Melody more and in a way settled with Lily and think that is really sad, so I hope that is not the point you are going to end on. I am guessing that Melody is dying of something and that is why she broke up with James, so I'm not sure how that will fit into his relationship with Lily. Obviously people can fall in love with more than one person in their life, but I hope that you do Lily justice as well. At least you have made her very great in the story even though Melody and her friend's don't like her. I am interested to see how you move this forward

Author's Response: Thank you Courtney, I appreciate the review!

I don't really want to give much away, but I can promise James never settled with Lily. As you can see through the story, the relationship between James and Lily is slowly growing. It's not sudden, nor will it happen overnight, but rather it will blossom throughout the story, maybe even without them knowing it.

People can most definitely fall in love with more than one person, if it's the right person.

I hope to do Lily justice as well as I possibly can, she has a big part to play in the upcoming chapters.

Thank you again for reading, and I hope you continue to read!


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