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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
I have to say I hate the pairing of Vic/Teddy.

But I loved this. So, it's a win in a way, isn't it?

I can never really get into the story of them two because I think many people make her kind of whiny in the stories I read Victorie in. Teddy I love. Maybe it's the part-Veela thing. Maybe I'm jealous of Veelas.

Maybe I'm insane. (That would explain a lot).

But naturally I enjoyed reading this because I enjoy everything you write. I thought this was going to drag on because of the length and it was obvious he was going to propose to her (and she was going to say yes) so I didn't understand what you would really need to map out for us. I'm actually glad you mapped everything out for us. You gave us a small glimpse into their life together, how they act when they have been away from each other for how long, their own personalities and traits. You even managed to add in some of your own minor characters (love the neighbor, love old people!) which made this all the more real.

It's funny. My friend came back from the Marines and when I read that Teddy got down on one knee, well, I imagined him because he only had ten days to stay and on one of those days he gave his girlfriend a ring (for her to wait for him after his service is up) in private but when everyone was around he tried to kind of 'recreate' the moment for everyone and instead of saying yes she got so red and was like 'UP! NOW! NO! GET UP!'

I could only imagine what Teddy's reaction would have been like if that was her response!

Author's Response: So, it's embarrassing that it's taken me so long to reply to this, and I'm very sorry for it. :( I hope you know that I love you and appreciate your reviews so, so much. ♥

I actually agree about Victoire - I loved my Vic, but I hate the way a lot of people write her. It's like they make her like Fleur in GoF, except worse. I actually like Fleur a lot in the first place, but I didn't want to make my Vic her carbon copy, because god, who turns out to be their parents' carbon copy?

At any rate, you are not insane! And I'm really glad you like my Victoire, even though you usually don't like her (and I'm so happy you like my writing so much in general, what a huge compliment for me!).

I love that story about your friend from the Marines - that sounds so funny, and I totally would have had her reaction in that situation. :P

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