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Review:starryskies55 says:
All the way through this I was cheering Bertie on! Save the goal! Talk to Rose! Dance, Bertie, dance!

You're very right- everyone loves Bertie. Especially me :D

Another great chapter, in short. Wonderfully written, developed Bertie as a character fantastically (is that a word?) and your writing is superb.

Couple of my favourite lines: I consider that a perfectly valid reason. - agreed!
"You're an animal." "No, I'm a teenage boy," - fair enough :)

I think the ending could be developed more, but overall a brilliant chapter!

With love, from your Challenge-master xx

Author's Response: LOL. Cheer him on, he really needs it... Oh, Rose, look what you do to him. :P

That is just one of my favorite lines, and I love Ewan, I wish he was in it more...

Thank you! :)

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