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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hahah! That was so funny! I thought it was something...alarming, between life and death! I was so into the story and I could not believe that it was all because of baby names. I can't stop laughing!

The way you set the emotions in the story was really great. It was just really funny and as you get to the end you think 'what's happening now?' and all that confusion and you read that its just about baby names. I was also, before I saw the end, going to say that this story doesn't have humour in it so why was it in that category and I saw the end and I'm like 'OH! That's why.'

I think you really had enough, or more than enough, description in the story to really get the whole story going. I found the dragons rather interesting and I would definitely would want to hear more about them!

Funny story you got,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you didn't feel like it was underwhelming - I was afraid that it would come off as, "Seriously, Beeezie? That was not a fulfilling ending!" I mean, I liked it, but that's not necessarily saying much. :P

I'm really glad that you found the dragons interesting! I'm really into the Beasts Division thing, so I'm thinking I will jump back into the dragons at some point. Hmm.

Thank you so much for your (really quick) helpful review. :)

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