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Review:megaaan says:
Ahah, this is brilliant! I really enjoyed it :-)

I loved all of the spells and Weasley's Wheezes you brought into it, and Neville's realisation at the end -- it was all very comedic and funny; poor Neville!

My only points were that it was very confusing at times. And why were there fairies around anywhere?! Also, at the beginning especially, the flow wasn't fantastic but it wasn't anything awful, haha.

I also love Hufflepuffs not being all nice and sweet all the time! I'm a 'Puff myself, and I hate it when we're stereotyped as being the boring ones :P Fantastic plot line once again - albeit confusing -- it must have been so difficult to come up with!

Congratulations, I really enjoyed it :-) And well done on getting 40,000 - I still can't believe how fast you've been writing! ;)

Megan xo

Author's Response: Thankyou! Hehe, he does get the naff end of the deal, doesn't he?

Yes, I think I may edit, because rereading it, I was confused too! Yes, bad flow is definitely a problem!

Haha yes! and thankyou, it did take a while ;)

Thanks Megan! I'm so happy I made it :D

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