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Review:imaginary lines says:
imaginary lines here with your requested review!

interesting (: i should start off with admitting like a little fan that i adore your writing. i really do. i think you have such talent, and that came across in the first three chapters. you brought canon characters to life and you kept their personality throughout the chapters.

i think nacrissa was a little oc for her, but i understand her want and need to go through the photo album. she wants to feel connected to her estranged sister, and this is the way she knew how.

andromeda is an interesting character. i've never really learned much about her, but i think the way you portrayed her was true to what we knew about her character. having a boy to raise would put a burden on someone, and knowing that her family has hated her for years would put bitterness. and understanding how she can't forgive nacrissa for having a family while she has lost everyone is understandable and heartbreaking.

i really enjoyed the chapters so far!

Author's Response: Oh, you're so sweet! :) Thank you! That totally just made my day! :)

And yeah, I think I'm going to rework the Narcissa chapter a little bit, just to explain her motivations a little more.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the review! :)

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