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Review:Temple Deer says:
Lovely idea, and as there were a lot of loose ends between Harry and the Dursley's, I think it is interesting to take him back here. I think you could slow down a bit, and give us some more. This is under 600 words; you could take it up to 2000 and not have us getting bored. I want to read more about Harry's thoughts. I want to see more about Mrs. Weasley's mourning. You tell us that Harry is doing Fred's chores, why not show us what those are? Settle yourself behind Harry's eyes and show us what he sees; show us what he thinks. Put us in his head.

I have only one complaint: why shouldn't Teddy be raised by his grandparents? They are his family. There must be a good reason for this. What is it? And, honestly, unless it is an essential part of your larger plot, don't put it in here. It's unlikely that Harry would have the time for an adventure if he's at home raising a one-year-old.

I am very curious where the Dursley's are. I am curious to see a reunion between Harry and Dudley. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Alright.. thank you for the review and the suggestion! I know I sort of need to write more about this stuff. Thank you so much!!

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