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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
This was a lovely one-shot. You described the feelings perfectly in a very short space of time, and the characterisation was spot-on. They seemed completely real, normal teenagers. I also liked that the character didn't get the guy. This is so unusual in stories, but so true in life ;). The little touches were also beautiful, such as knowing what Sirius was laughing about in the exam. I was reading the other reviews, and I think you're right. This definitely works best as a one-shot. 10/10.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! This was a fun piece to write, combining the two challenges, and I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. Normally, I'm a fan of happy endings, but somehow I didn't feel this girl's story was a happy one -- and you're right, it doesn't always turn out that way in real life. It was a fun little jaunt into young love and heartbreak. XD

Thanks again!

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