Hey guys! I just edited Ch.4 "Family Quidditch & The Lovegood's Nargle Dance" from "A Weasley Vacation" and I'm much happier with it now. I added better spelling&grammar, more descriptions where it lacked some and better wording. One of my favourite chapters in the book, 3 fun and contrasting POV's all with very different cliffhangers at the end. Please let me know your thoughts and read it. Even if you already have, it's much better now.