Fanfiction Review Requests

Ashley Marie

Headmaster
Staff member
Do you want someone to review your fanfiction, either in work or complete? This is the thread to ask for those reviews. Give us a short summary of what your fanfic is about and what type of reviewing you'd like.
 

JMilz

Moderator
I'd love reviews for Wreck. It is ongoing and I expect it to top out at fortyish chapters. It is moving pretty quickly, so it should be finished by North American summer. It is a Dramione, so I don't recommend reading unless you're into that ship.

Rating: M
Pair: Dramione
Summary: Serving as Minister of Magic, Hermione Granger is finally at the peak of her career. With a beautiful family, a successful book, and the public on her side, her life should be a fairytale. Unfortunately, there is trouble in paradise, and when Draco Malfoy pays her a visit, she begins recalling their history and questioning her marriage.
Warnings: Substance abuse, sexual content, sensitive topic, profanity, mild violence.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: Canon checks (does it follow canon as well as possible?), character development, grammar/spelling.
 

DobbyMinerva

New member
Would love feedback on my WIP Casa Oscura. I just posted a new chapter and the next will probably be up by next week. Thank you thank you!

I'd also be happy to exchange reviews.

Deets:
Rating: M
Pair: Sirius/OC and other pairings
Summary: At that moment, trapped in an underground bunker beneath a raging waterfall in the heart of the Amazon rainforest, Sirius Black wished he had taken Spanish at Hogwarts. Perhaps then he would have realized earlier that 'casa oscura' does not mean 'safe house'.
Warnings: Substance abuse, sexual content, sensitive topic, profanity, mild violence.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: plot consistency, character dev, writing style, general reactions
*Bonus: Some characters speak Portuguese occasionally and I would love for any native speakers to let me know if I'm using any of the expressions incorrectly. I lived in Latin America for a little bit and speak Spanish, but Portuguese still throws me off!
 

JMilz

Moderator
I'd love feedback on this novella I'm working on. This was a requested fic that I took on, but I've been having a lot of fun with it. It's really fluffy, but there is obviously an ongoing plot. It's honestly meant to be a humorous, good-feel piece of work that is a nice break for me considering my other WIP can feel very heavy.

A Creature Most Unusual

Rating: M
Pair: Dramione
Summary: Draco Malfoy is on a mission. Unfortunately, Hermione Granger catches him in the act. When she sees that he has adopted a rather unusual magical creature, she becomes determined to make sure he takes care of it. Little does she know, the animal may hold her key to eternal glory.
Warnings: Contains profanity, Scenes of a mild sexual nature
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: General reactions, writing style, grammar/spelling/typos
 

Alexa Grey

New member
Please take a look at my first couple of fan fiction stories. Reviews really appreciated! https://harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=339454&showRestricted
And
 

Eren2019

New member
The Bowtruckles and Me (15+)

Rating :15+
Pair : Leta Lestrange / Newt Scamander
Summary : Newt was friends with the Bowtruckles.
Warnings : mild violence and mild sexual nature will be written later.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking for : I'll appreciate for general reactions, character development, writing style and any thoughts.
 

AlecJamesCaius_

New member
Type of review I'd like: I'm not too picky, I appreciate all kinds of thoughts and opinions. The more detailed, the better. Obviously I do prefer it if your criticism is constructive and argumentative.
Title: A Weasley Vacation by AlecJamesCaius_
Ship(s): Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Hugo/OC
Genre: Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama
Any warnings/ratings we should be made aware of: Contains profanity, Strong Violence, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
Summary:




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The 3 Doomcurses, written in a sacred book protected by the Ministry. The Imperius Animalus Curse, the Furari Curse and the Doomspell Curse. Them being stolen 3 months prior to the start of the book set this 8th Harry Potter Novel in motion...
Can a happy ending still be considered a happy ending when everyone dies?

COMPLETED. // Undergoing edits!
 
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