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Fanfiction Review Requests
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JMilz
Head of Ravenclaw House
I'd love reviews for Wreck. It is ongoing and I expect it to top out at fortyish chapters. It is moving pretty quickly, so it should be finished by North American summer. It is a Dramione, so I don't recommend reading unless you're into that ship.
Rating: M
Pair: Dramione
Summary: Serving as Minister of Magic, Hermione Granger is finally at the peak of her career. With a beautiful family, a successful book, and the public on her side, her life should be a fairytale. Unfortunately, there is trouble in paradise, and when Draco Malfoy pays her a visit, she begins recalling their history and questioning her marriage.
Warnings: Substance abuse, sexual content, sensitive topic, profanity, mild violence.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: Canon checks (does it follow canon as well as possible?), character development, grammar/spelling.
Rating: M
Pair: Dramione
Summary: Serving as Minister of Magic, Hermione Granger is finally at the peak of her career. With a beautiful family, a successful book, and the public on her side, her life should be a fairytale. Unfortunately, there is trouble in paradise, and when Draco Malfoy pays her a visit, she begins recalling their history and questioning her marriage.
Warnings: Substance abuse, sexual content, sensitive topic, profanity, mild violence.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: Canon checks (does it follow canon as well as possible?), character development, grammar/spelling.
DobbyMinerva
New member
Would love feedback on my WIP Casa Oscura. I just posted a new chapter and the next will probably be up by next week. Thank you thank you!
I'd also be happy to exchange reviews.
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Rating: M
Pair: Sirius/OC and other pairings
Summary: At that moment, trapped in an underground bunker beneath a raging waterfall in the heart of the Amazon rainforest, Sirius Black wished he had taken Spanish at Hogwarts. Perhaps then he would have realized earlier that 'casa oscura' does not mean 'safe house'.
Warnings: Substance abuse, sexual content, sensitive topic, profanity, mild violence.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: plot consistency, character dev, writing style, general reactions
*Bonus: Some characters speak Portuguese occasionally and I would love for any native speakers to let me know if I'm using any of the expressions incorrectly. I lived in Latin America for a little bit and speak Spanish, but Portuguese still throws me off!
I'd also be happy to exchange reviews.
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Rating: M
Pair: Sirius/OC and other pairings
Summary: At that moment, trapped in an underground bunker beneath a raging waterfall in the heart of the Amazon rainforest, Sirius Black wished he had taken Spanish at Hogwarts. Perhaps then he would have realized earlier that 'casa oscura' does not mean 'safe house'.
Warnings: Substance abuse, sexual content, sensitive topic, profanity, mild violence.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: plot consistency, character dev, writing style, general reactions
*Bonus: Some characters speak Portuguese occasionally and I would love for any native speakers to let me know if I'm using any of the expressions incorrectly. I lived in Latin America for a little bit and speak Spanish, but Portuguese still throws me off!
JMilz
Head of Ravenclaw House
I'd love feedback on this novella I'm working on. This was a requested fic that I took on, but I've been having a lot of fun with it. It's really fluffy, but there is obviously an ongoing plot. It's honestly meant to be a humorous, good-feel piece of work that is a nice break for me considering my other WIP can feel very heavy.
A Creature Most Unusual
Rating: M
Pair: Dramione
Summary: Draco Malfoy is on a mission. Unfortunately, Hermione Granger catches him in the act. When she sees that he has adopted a rather unusual magical creature, she becomes determined to make sure he takes care of it. Little does she know, the animal may hold her key to eternal glory.
Warnings: Contains profanity, Scenes of a mild sexual nature
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: General reactions, writing style, grammar/spelling/typos
A Creature Most Unusual
Rating: M
Pair: Dramione
Summary: Draco Malfoy is on a mission. Unfortunately, Hermione Granger catches him in the act. When she sees that he has adopted a rather unusual magical creature, she becomes determined to make sure he takes care of it. Little does she know, the animal may hold her key to eternal glory.
Warnings: Contains profanity, Scenes of a mild sexual nature
Type of Reviews I'm Looking For: General reactions, writing style, grammar/spelling/typos
Alexa Grey
New member
Please take a look at my first couple of fan fiction stories. Reviews really appreciated! https://harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=339454&showRestricted
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ANGELUS OF LUX LUCIS by Alexa Grey on HarryPotterFanfiction.com
Rating: 12+ | Chapters: 28 | Words: 28865 | Reviews: 9 | Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger, Albus Dumbledore, Poppy Pomfrey, Severus Snape, Bellatrix Lestrange, Voldmort/Tom Riddle | Relationship: Other Pairing | Era: Hogwarts | Story Type: Short story | Genre(s): Drama...
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Eren2019
New member
The Bowtruckles and Me (15+）
Rating ：15+
Pair : Leta Lestrange / Newt Scamander
Summary : Newt was friends with the Bowtruckles.
Warnings : mild violence and mild sexual nature will be written later.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking for : I'll appreciate for general reactions, character development, writing style and any thoughts.
Rating ：15+
Pair : Leta Lestrange / Newt Scamander
Summary : Newt was friends with the Bowtruckles.
Warnings : mild violence and mild sexual nature will be written later.
Type of Reviews I'm Looking for : I'll appreciate for general reactions, character development, writing style and any thoughts.
AlecJamesCaius_
New member
Type of review I'd like: I'm not too picky, I appreciate all kinds of thoughts and opinions. The more detailed, the better. Obviously I do prefer it if your criticism is constructive and argumentative.
Title: A Weasley Vacation by AlecJamesCaius_
Ship(s): Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Hugo/OC
Genre: Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama
Any warnings/ratings we should be made aware of: Contains profanity, Strong Violence, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
Summary:
Banner by me
The 3 Doomcurses, written in a sacred book protected by the Ministry. The Imperius Animalus Curse, the Furari Curse and the Doomspell Curse. Them being stolen 3 months prior to the start of the book set this 8th Harry Potter Novel in motion...
Can a happy ending still be considered a happy ending when everyone dies?
COMPLETED. // Undergoing edits!
Title: A Weasley Vacation by AlecJamesCaius_
Ship(s): Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Hugo/OC
Genre: Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama
Any warnings/ratings we should be made aware of: Contains profanity, Strong Violence, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
Summary:
Banner by me
The 3 Doomcurses, written in a sacred book protected by the Ministry. The Imperius Animalus Curse, the Furari Curse and the Doomspell Curse. Them being stolen 3 months prior to the start of the book set this 8th Harry Potter Novel in motion...
Can a happy ending still be considered a happy ending when everyone dies?
COMPLETED. // Undergoing edits!
Kamiccola
Member
I have just completed Hogwarts Prank Club and would love to hear what you think. Feel free to critique your heart out - I can take it.
Title: Hogwarts Prank Club
Ship(s): none
Key characters: Remus, Sirius, James, Peter, Severus, Lily
Genre: Humor, Friendship, Werewolf
Status: COMPLETE
Rating: 12+
Warnings: NONE
Length: 7 chapters
Summary: Remus Lupin, a shy, young werewolf, must win a pranking competition to earn his place among the wizard children. A lighthearted tale of building friendship and confidence while having fun. Who will become the Prank King?
Link: Hogwarts Prank Club
Title: Hogwarts Prank Club
Ship(s): none
Key characters: Remus, Sirius, James, Peter, Severus, Lily
Genre: Humor, Friendship, Werewolf
Status: COMPLETE
Rating: 12+
Warnings: NONE
Length: 7 chapters
Summary: Remus Lupin, a shy, young werewolf, must win a pranking competition to earn his place among the wizard children. A lighthearted tale of building friendship and confidence while having fun. Who will become the Prank King?
Link: Hogwarts Prank Club
messenger of love
New member
I've gotten back into hpff after discovering that the site's miraculously come back to life, and I'm ready to jump right into the thick of things!
Title: Of Arrogant Toerags and Rabid Redheads
Ship(s): James/Lily
Genre: Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure, Young Adult
Any warnings/ratings we should be made aware of: Contains profanity, Strong violence, Scenes of a sexual nature, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
Summary:
James and Lily are polar opposites, yet exactly the same.
One a Marauder, the other a Prefect, both brilliant and marvellous in their own right and, according to Sirius, both complete idiots.
A Sixth Year Lily Evans finds herself inexplicably drawn to a changing James Potter. James finds it impossible to draw himself away from her. They are as similar and different as a Stag and a Doe.
Type of review I'd like: Really just what you enjoy about it and, I suppose, don't enjoy - help me hone my craft!
edit - FORGOT TO PUT THE LINK (https://harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=339892&showRestricted)
Title: Of Arrogant Toerags and Rabid Redheads
Ship(s): James/Lily
Genre: Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure, Young Adult
Any warnings/ratings we should be made aware of: Contains profanity, Strong violence, Scenes of a sexual nature, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
Summary:
James and Lily are polar opposites, yet exactly the same.
One a Marauder, the other a Prefect, both brilliant and marvellous in their own right and, according to Sirius, both complete idiots.
A Sixth Year Lily Evans finds herself inexplicably drawn to a changing James Potter. James finds it impossible to draw himself away from her. They are as similar and different as a Stag and a Doe.
Type of review I'd like: Really just what you enjoy about it and, I suppose, don't enjoy - help me hone my craft!
edit - FORGOT TO PUT THE LINK (https://harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=339892&showRestricted)
Rose Pond
New member
My Dramione fic "Far From Over" is ongoing and currently at 14 chapters with a lot more to come. 
This is a post-war seventh year fic with Malfoy struggling to redeem himself and Hermione struggling to look past old grievances. Rating is currently 15+ but may stretch to M in later chapters.
LINK: Far From Over <<<
"The War is over and a new school year is starting at Hogwarts. Hermione Granger and her friends are returning for their seventh year at school, but not all old prejudices have been put to ground with the death of Voldemort. Though most people are just struggling to move on and return their lives to a semblance of 'normal', there are still mutterings in the hallways and meetings happening
in the shadows. All Hermione wants is to get her N.E.W.T.s without the threat of imminent death hanging over her head for once, and Merlin help anyone who gets in her way, but a certain Slytherin is determined to prove that his past won't define his future, and he's decided that associating with one Hermione Granger is the way to accomplish that. He's only using her smarts and good social standing to ingratiate himself into the new wizarding society; he certainly doesn't care that Ron Weasley is definitely not the right boy to handle her wit and firecracker personality. Of course not."
Chapters have mini summaries posted with them.
I'd love reviews on anything you particularly enjoyed, be in a particular line, a scene, an interaction between characters, or any other thoughts you had while reading.
This is a post-war seventh year fic with Malfoy struggling to redeem himself and Hermione struggling to look past old grievances. Rating is currently 15+ but may stretch to M in later chapters. LINK: Far From Over <<<
"The War is over and a new school year is starting at Hogwarts. Hermione Granger and her friends are returning for their seventh year at school, but not all old prejudices have been put to ground with the death of Voldemort. Though most people are just struggling to move on and return their lives to a semblance of 'normal', there are still mutterings in the hallways and meetings happening
in the shadows. All Hermione wants is to get her N.E.W.T.s without the threat of imminent death hanging over her head for once, and Merlin help anyone who gets in her way, but a certain Slytherin is determined to prove that his past won't define his future, and he's decided that associating with one Hermione Granger is the way to accomplish that. He's only using her smarts and good social standing to ingratiate himself into the new wizarding society; he certainly doesn't care that Ron Weasley is definitely not the right boy to handle her wit and firecracker personality. Of course not."Chapters have mini summaries posted with them.
I'd love reviews on anything you particularly enjoyed, be in a particular line, a scene, an interaction between characters, or any other thoughts you had while reading.
Hey all! I plan to leave reviews on these soon! I’ve been reading through them and just wanted to let you know they weren’t forgotten about.
Rose Pond
New member
Thanks Ashley! I look forward to you thoughts.
PearlyDewDrops
New member
I’d love some reviews on my first story.
Title: The Girl with the Emerald Eyes
Ships: James/Lily, Frank / Alice, Sirius/OC , Remus/OC
Genre : Drama, Romance, Humour, Young Adult, Action/Adventure
Rating: 15+
Link: https://harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=340217&showRestricted
Summary: The story of James and Lily. The life, laughs and love they shared. From sixth year until death.
While the story does have an eventual focus on James and Lily it really explores the life’s of both them and their friend groups at Hogwarts.
Title: The Girl with the Emerald Eyes
Ships: James/Lily, Frank / Alice, Sirius/OC , Remus/OC
Genre : Drama, Romance, Humour, Young Adult, Action/Adventure
Rating: 15+
Link: https://harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=340217&showRestricted
Summary: The story of James and Lily. The life, laughs and love they shared. From sixth year until death.
While the story does have an eventual focus on James and Lily it really explores the life’s of both them and their friend groups at Hogwarts.
mymischiefmanaged
New member
I used to be here a lot a few years ago but have had some time out from fanfiction. I just started a new Rose/Scorpius Action/Adventure story that I'm really excited about and would love some feedback if anyone's interested! It's been a while...
Some of my old stories were quite popular and it was nice feeling like people were enjoying reading so I guess I just want to know if this catches anyone's interest and is worth continuing! It'll be novel length but chapter 1 is under 1500 words so should be a quick read
Title: Rosie
Ships: Rose/Scorpius
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Action/Adventure
Rating: M
Link: Here (M)
Summary: Rose hasn't seen or spoken to Scorpius since graduation, but now he's in her office covered in blood and they need to work together to save her cousin. It doesn't help that the rest of her relatives keep being attacked and the two of them have somehow ended up as the chief suspects.
Some of my old stories were quite popular and it was nice feeling like people were enjoying reading so I guess I just want to know if this catches anyone's interest and is worth continuing! It'll be novel length but chapter 1 is under 1500 words so should be a quick read
Title: Rosie
Ships: Rose/Scorpius
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Action/Adventure
Rating: M
Link: Here (M)
Summary: Rose hasn't seen or spoken to Scorpius since graduation, but now he's in her office covered in blood and they need to work together to save her cousin. It doesn't help that the rest of her relatives keep being attacked and the two of them have somehow ended up as the chief suspects.
