Wow, it's so poetic! I can barely resist rushing to read all your other stories but I'm going to abstain so as not to clog up your reviews! Expect some more tomorrow though :)Author's Response: Wow, thank you again! It's wonderful to hear such compliments! I'm so glad to have found your reviews (this being an old story, I didn't notice them at first, my apologies). ^_^ Report Review
It's so great when you find a really good author, especially when they've written so much!
The end actually gave me chills when his mind changed!Author's Response: Wow, thank you! :O I have written a lot, that's true, but it's fantastic to hear that you think I'm really good! It's made my day. ^_^
Oooh, that ending was fun to write! It's been a while, so I'd forgotten about it until you mentioned it. It was quite something to actually make Remus transform over the course of the story. Report Review
I love how you've given Prongs such a different voice to Padfoot, it's like a school when you're supposed to write in the voice of a character but no on ever can! Hats off to you :)Author's Response: It was fun to experiment with voices in this story collection, and I'm glad that they do sound like different people - I sometimes have issues making my male characters all sound alike. ;)
It's wonderful that you've enjoyed this, thank you very much! :D Report Review
I feel like my vocabulary is seriously lacking, I have a dictionary open in another tab :) That only reiterates how good an author you are though!Author's Response: lol, really? I must have been showing off when I wrote this, as I didn't realize the kind of language I was using! Unless I meant for Sirius to sound this way... can't remember.
Thank you very much for the compliment! ^_^ Report Review
wow! this a really, really awesome story!! although i dont like peter, it's good to know that he wasnt always the bad guy.
anyway, i really like your story and i would like to know if you have written any other stories as i would very much like to read them.
oh and by-the-way great banner!! it's one of the few banners that are actually good!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, I wanted to show Peter before his betrayal - he had to be the Marauder's friend for a reason, especially to be so trusted by them. :)
I do have a lot of other stories if you're interested - you can take a look at my author page and see if there's anything else you might like. :) And the banner! I'm really glad that you liked it - it's something different I'd tried out. :D Report Review
Really really liked this story. It was great.
I liked the way you made all the characters.
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Peter has character depth!!! yay! you have no idea how much it excites me that first off he's actually included in this, and secondly that he has depth, instead of being some stupid little idiot. amazing chapter! i really do just love how you've portrayed each of the marauders individually and as a whole :)Author's Response: Haha, yes! I wrote this in order to show that Peter could be portrayed as a good, even strong character deserving of being a Marauder. It's fantastic that you liked this as, even after all this time, Peter still isn't given many positive roles in fanfiction.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this! :D Report Review
wow. that is just insanely, wow. its just so remus! and the end where he transform, the short words just seems to spell out his loss of coherency as a person. loooved this chapter! its so very remus lupin.Author's Response: This one was really exciting to write, especially with the ending being so horrifying as he loses control of his mind. It's wonderful that you enjoyed it! Thank you very much! :D Report Review
that is an incredibly cute way for James to ask her out :)
it just seemed to encapture James the way you wrote it, more carefree in comparison to sirius. and i love the slight humour through the writingAuthor's Response: James is a great character to write, though I don't know why, since I don't exactly like him. His love for Lily makes him so funny to write and I'm really glad you like how he turned out here. :D
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review! ^_^ Report Review
i'm liking the beginning of this :) i think you've potrayed each of the characters really well, especially the hostility between sirius and rest of his family. them freaking out remus is a nice lighter bit aswellAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! Wow, this is an old story, but I'm glad that you're liking it so far! :D Report Review
You are right, Peter wasn't always a traitor. It's nice to see him refusing the things we know he later accepts. It's so moving. Beautiful. Kind. Daring, Amazing.Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^_^ It always bothered me how bad a rap Peter gets in fanfiction, so I wrote this in reaction. I'm really glad that you liked how it turned out. :) Report Review
Intense. Wow. Way hardcore. Deep, strong. I loved the ending, how you showed how his mind changed. How his mind worked on full moons. It was marvelous.
Maybe that's why he's so brilliant; because he loses himself once a month entirely.Author's Response: A bit of a jump from the previous chapter, yes. :P It was interesting writing this part because of how Remus loses himself at the end - my inspiration came from the transformation scene in PoA (probably the movie more than the book... *looks innocent*).
Thank you again for taking the time to review! I really appreciate hearing form you. :D Report Review
That was cool. James was worried and it was sweet.Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you like this! :) Report Review
Gentler and kinder than I had anticipated of Sirius. Bravo.Author's Response: Thank you! :) Gentler and kinder, eh? I can't remember this story much, but I'll have to look back at it to see. ;) Report Review
“Well, Potter, are you going to tell me or just stand there looking at me?”
“You’re nice to look at, though,” I burst out, hearing Padfoot’s snicker from down the table.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It's like a mixture of hilarity and cuteness. I love James. He is really such a nice guy. I was so excited to read this chapter.
I love how you portray Lily in James' eyes. It's so endearing.Author's Response: James is SO much fun to write in the first person. I don't know why, since he's not my favourite character or anything, but imagining him as that boy for Lily, always hopeful and always rejected, makes me enjoy writing him. He's just so silly and endearing. ^_^ I'm really glad that you liked him in this.
Thank you again for the wonderful reviews! I haven't looked back at these old stories for a while, so it's nice to revisit them. :) Report Review
That was so sweet I was cheering for James too :)Author's Response: Thanks! James is a sweet guy to write, haha. ;) Report Review
Hm.very very good. Very thought provoking. ANouther great chapter, I just thought Peter was a little too thoughtful. The rest of it was amazing though. Great, great job with this story.Author's Response: I was probably trying too hard to redeem him from canon. *sigh* Oh well, but I'll remember that for next time I write Peter (as I do have another Peter story started). Thank you very much for reviewing! :) Report Review
*Shivers* Too good. You explained Moony the way I would. Thoughtful, much more than James or Sirius. Good job and once again, I'll ttyl in the next chapter.Author's Response: Thank you muchly! =D This was a chilling chapter to write, especially at the end. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
Anouther great chapter keeping to the characters and I'll write more later.Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
I usually don't comment on every chapter, but wow. This was great. Let me just say that your representation of all the mauraders (especially Sirius) and Snape, was one of the best I have ever read. Congrats! I am going to read more right now.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Since this was my first story, it's great to know that the portrayals of the characters are still accurate. ^_^ Report Review
You did Rowling's Pettigrew complete justice. Wow. It's so believable, his road going this way. I'm also relieved we finally learned why Peter had all those bruises and things on him. You explained it so near to the end, I thought you weren't going to ever, and then that would have been a cruel cliffhanger. The writing's flawless in this one, and just completely...right. Thanks for writing it. =DAuthor's Response: I most certainly don't like being too cruel with my cliffhangers - the reader had to learn the root of Peter's issues before the end. Though putting it right at the end was a tad cruel on my part. :P Wow, thank you for those wonderful compliments - this and the Remus part are my favourites of this collection, and it's great that you liked this one about Peter. He's such an underrated and despised character. Thank you again for taking the time to review. ^_^ Report Review
ahhh, what a good short story. i loved the fact that you wrote it from 4 differing point of views. and i think its brilliant how you wrote pettogrew's. loved it, keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's great that you liked Peter's the most, since it's my favourite of these as well. ^_^ Report Review
I loved the way you represented Wormy here. You're right - he is sort of hated in fanfics, poor guy. But I agree - he wasn't always that way. Nicely done! And I loved the other chapters too. I just waited til I'd finished reading all of them til I reviewed! I think Sirius' chapter was my favourite.
I really liked how you portrayed his sort of, inner battle I guess, with his feelings. How he'll always be a Black even though he turned his back. Really well written. I'd love to see a Lily chapter!
Keep it up! ^^Author's Response: Thanks very much for reviewing! I'm happy to hear that you liked my portrayal of Peter, poor kid, as well as the other Marauders. =) Report Review
too great.Author's Response: Thank you. =) Report Review
Is this the last chapter of the story? You didn't do Lily, or Lucius. Sorry I'm a little obsessed with him, I have a picture of him and next to it it says 'Have you hugged your death eater today?' it's cool. oh also read 'Harry Riddle and the Anti-Trio' It's great! it's only 2 chapters so far but it's good, oh yeah I'm here to review YOUR story not tell you about other peoples stories.
~SerenityAuthor's Response: Is the last chapter right now. I have a partially written copy of Lily's done and that hopefully will be the last chapter, if I ever end up finishing it. *blushes* I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story. =) Report Review
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