445 Reviews Found

Review #1, by angie123 The Costume Ball

4th March 2015:
What is up with Luna?

Author's Response: All will be revealed in time ;)

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Review #2, by Amandajewls The Cycle Has Already Begun

19th February 2015:
"..Nor Hell a fury like a woman scorned!" - William Congreve, The Mourning Bride (1697)

What a great twist - I suspected Cho was the partner, but I was thinking she was imperiused herself or another person in poly juice.

I love how you have picked out little details from the first Cannon books and made whole stories based on it! What a fun play in Rawling's backyard.

I am looking forward to the sequel already - only half way through the first story!

Author's Response: The sequel should take you a bit longer... it's like 80+ chapters :) I've tried to keep as close to cannon as possible to make the storyline I've come up with more believable... plus I didn't like the real 6th and 7th books at all so including things from the awesomeness of the first 5 books, I get to feel like maybe it really did happen this way instead. Hope you like all the twists and turns still to come! Thanks for reading! And thanks for sharing your thoughts, I appreciate the feedback!

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Review #3, by Amandajewls A Quidditch Game to Remember

19th February 2015:
What a fun story so far - I mean entertaining, thrilling, intriguing and well written! There are so many undercurrent subplots I am enjoying watching each of them unfold slowly - and you are doing a great job of balancing focus on each one to keep them alive and not stagnant.

*spoiler guess* I am guessing a few things about who Luna and Harry really are, and about Cho too - I look forward to seeing if I'm right!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you're enjoying reading the story :) There's quite a lot going on... and even more in the sequels so don't worry, subplots will continue to supplement the main story arc so you'll have plenty more to speculate on once you figure out Luna, Harry and Cho ;)

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Review #4, by kroodor11 Never Again the Same

7th January 2015:
NO! :( This makes my heart hurt.

Author's Response: I'm afraid it only gets worse before it gets better... and then worse again ;) Thanks for reading!

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Review #5, by Kelsey The Ignorant VS. the Understanding

6th January 2015:
I seriously just started crying at school (I'm a teacher) when Ron came in and started reading to Harry. My heart is hurting for it. Well done - and for this being your first fic? I'm impressed. I look forward to reading all three. xx

Author's Response: Thank you, I do enjoy hearing when someone is touched by something I've written. Glad to have a teacher's approval :) (please disregard all the spelling and grammar errors, I haven't had time to go back and clean them up) ;)

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Review #6, by Matt A Wizard Wedding

29th October 2014:
Absolutely loving this series, I can't wait to start reading the next ones c: Would highly recommend to anyone who loves the originals

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read Coven of Warriors... it's a bit longer of a read as it kind of got away from me :) Thank you for the recommendation... Happy reading!

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Review #7, by Micah Getting a Clue

5th September 2014:
Hey I'm rereading this because I recently finished the first five books of harry potter and I wanted to read these with those fresh on my mind but I did notice that when he remembers dumbledore's conversation after they leave his office that harry mentions the ring before they are supposed to know about it? Thanks!

Author's Response: Good catch! Thank you... Once I have some time, I am definitely intending to go through and re-edit out all the mistakes I missed the first time around and I will definitely note this as one of the fixes :) Hope you enjoy these stories as much the second time through! (And I'm sure you'll find many more mistakes, feel free to point out major ones as sometimes I just keep missing things)

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Review #8, by Dr. Who The Costume Ball

31st August 2014:
I admire the creativity that you have put in this story. Simply amazing.
However, sorry to be "that" guy, but the representation of some characters is a bit off, in my opinion.
Other than that, a job excellently done, can't wait for your next work.
Stay Awesome.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it other than a few characters being off from the canon :) I admit, as the story goes on into the sequels, you'll probably find that more and more as I took a few liberties to make things work the way I either wanted or needed them to for the plot (of which there really is none... I don't know what's going to happen until I sit down to write a new chapter armed with notes of what's already happened so I don't forget things) I hope you make it through Ring of Mykele and move onto Coven of Warriors because I actually like that one much better :) RoM serves its purpose as the first in a series I've wound up making, but things really take off in the sequel.

I appreciate the review very much, thanks for reading and giving the story a try, hope you continue to enjoy and find it creative!

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Review #9, by lizzysparkles The Beginning of the End

10th August 2014:
I have to say I put off reading this story for a while because I thought it wouldn't appeal to me. I've been reading more Hermione/Fred or George stories, and I saw your second story was for that pairing, and I figured I should read this one first. I have to say, I wish I had read this sooner. I was drawn in easily and read for over an hour straight at one point. Honestly, there were parts in the middle that seemed to drag on excessively long, but overall I really enjoyed your writing style. I've read stories where the characters are portrayed completely differently than those we have come to know and love, but that wasn't the case here, and I was pleased that it seemed so true. I'm glad I decided to finally read your story, and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you took the chance if you enjoyed it :) To be honest, the next story started out H/Hr just like this one, but I have no plot or outline and just write building from the previous chapters... when the relationships began to shift, I had to come back to Ring of Mykele to heavily edit and reflect the future changes and have them make sense. Now that I'm on the third story, I am much happier having the pairings that I do :) I'm glad you think I've stayed somewhat true to the characters, it was something I was trying very hard to do... I was so upset with HBP and DH that I felt the need to make up my own ending and wanted it to feel genuine. (I still haven't even seen the movies for HBP and DH... that's how much faith I lost in JK Rowling- especially for that hokey children's book epilogue thrown on at the end of what is essentially the darkest installment of a young adult series turned adult.) Sorry, rant over... as you can see, I easily go off on tangents which is why I'm sure many besides yourself have found parts of the story tedious and long... again, I have no plan for where this is going so it's easy to get sidetracked and I fear you will find parts of the sequels equally dragging and excessive, so fair warning :) Thanks for giving the stories a chance and I hope the road to the Hr/F pairing is worth the wait for you!

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Review #10, by dracona1 The Ministry of Magic

29th July 2014:
No way! Arthur minister for magic! Wizard god!

Author's Response: Yes way! At least the way I see is he should be minister of magic :) Happy Reading!

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Review #11, by Grim_reaper95 Secrets and Loss

19th June 2014:
Was in verge of tears. Excellent author you are, and a cruel one too. Brilliantly written.

Author's Response: Thank you! And spoiler alert... there's another hard to cope with death coming up of an even more important character, have your tissues ready!

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Review #12, by Doug james The Beginning of the End

11th June 2014:
Wow, what a great first novel. I love what you did with Luna and was almost overcome with the angst for Harry and most of his closest friends. I certainly didn't expect Cho to be a major protagonist and it was nice to see Draco turn to the light. Overall the plot just kept bubbling along and really kept me entertained. I now look forward to the coven of warriors which already looks epic. Absolutely excellent stuff, really enjoying this.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the kind words and yes... Coven of Warriors has certainly become an epic- it got a bit away from me :) So happy to hear you will be reading on! Thank you!

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Review #13, by Gryffindor_Pnix_Girl The Beginning of the End

19th May 2014:
I loved this! I was hooked from the start :) it was a fantastic read :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I hope you like the sequel as well, though it is a bit longer ;) Thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed the story, I appreciate it. Happy reading!

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Review #14, by Gryffindor_Pnix_Girl On the Attack

18th May 2014:
You have gotten me hooked !

Author's Response: Yay! Well, I hope you'l re in it for the long haul because the sequel is super long and there will be a third and possibly fourth as well... the story kind of got away from me and now I'm just not sure how long it'll be until it's done :) Thanks for reading!

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Review #15, by Gryffindor_Pnix_Girl Confessions

15th May 2014:
I am utterly in love with this story!

Author's Response: Why thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy it :)

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Review #16, by ARLENE The Beginning of the End

3rd May 2014:
Loved this story just going to start on the next thankyou

Author's Response: Awesome! So glad you liked it :) The sequel is a bit longer and at 78 chapters... it is still a WIP. But it will not be abandoned and there is a third sequel in the works as well. Thank you for reading and for letting me know that you liked the story, I truly appreciate it!

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Review #17, by fenix13 The Beginning of the End

3rd March 2014:
I am actually now at about chapter 15 of the sequel to this story but I just had to come back and let you know that I loved this story. I have read many fan fics before but none that got my mind spinning as much as this and its sequel. I love your writing style and appreciate the fact that while you remained true to the characters that we have all grown to love so much, you were also able to put your own stamp on them to make the story completely unique and refreshing. I love the development of Luna's character in particular. Once again thank you for sharing this fan fic with us all. I must get back to the sequel now haha thankyou.

Author's Response: Well thank you, I'm grateful that you're enjoying the stories so much and can only hope you continue to do so :) Since I didn't care for the last two books, I've tried to come up with an ending that I do like and it's awesome knowing there are others like you who enjoy the journey I'm taking with these characters that I like so much. With any luck, my own novels will be as well received someday. Thank you for reading and for taking a moment to let me know that you're enjoying the stories. It definitely keeps me motivated to keep posting new chapters whenever I can.

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Review #18, by Abby Questions, Culprits, Truths and Decisions

1st March 2014:
At the end of this chapter when Ginny is thinking of neville a song on my itunes played the most appropriate lyrics for that moment i think.

Who would you be?
What would you look like,
When you looked at me for the very first time?
Today could have been the next day of the rest of your life.

Not a day goes by,
That I don't think of you,
I'm always asking why this crazy world had to lose,
Such a ray of light we never knew,
Gone too soon, yeah.

Gone Too Soon by Daughtry

I rarely find a fanfic that can make me wish it were published yours is one of the few.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story :) It made me sad to kill of some of the characters that I did, but eventually they all still serve a greater purpose. You're right, that song is appropriate, I love putting music to literature... years ago when this site still allowed them, I used to post songfics all the time and I wish I could still post them. But the sequel to this story is turning out to be quite the undertaking. Thanks for reading and letting me in on your thoughts! Hope you continue to enjoy the stories :)

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Review #19, by John Secrets and Loss

4th February 2014:
I take back what I said about this not being dark. well done.

Author's Response: Thank you :) Not everyone was happy with this decision but not everyone can survive in war...

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Review #20, by John Getting a Clue

4th February 2014:
I honestly do not know how long ago this was written so I am also not sure if you will ever read this, but all in all this in my opinion is so far better than the original. Only thing I would say thus far is while you did have the attack on the ministry we are failing to see the clear and present danger that is voldemort. One last thing. in the second paragraph of the flashback into Dumbledore's office you make reference to the ring. and a couple paragraphs later it goes back to being an unknown object. just thought you ought to know. I will continue reading.

Author's Response: Thanks for calling that to my attention... yes I do still answer all reviews. This is the first story in a series I am doing and so I still get updates and will happily answer all comments and/or criticism :) Trust me, this story only gets darker as you read and the clear and present danger builds (especially in the sequel). This is simply a reworking of how I'd rather the series had ended so while I do reference what came before in the first 5 real books, I'm trying to take it far away from the real 6th and 7th books... those were focused on Voldemort, mine are more focused on the whole war (again, especially in the sequel) Glad you're liking it so far and I hope you continue to read as there are quite a few twists and turns coming up. Thanks for your review and for reading!

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Review #21, by Micah The Ignorant VS. the Understanding

15th January 2014:
Hello I would just like to say thank you! I think your story is perfect! The only problem with Harry Potter to me is that at the end I don't think she killed enough good people and that she greatly reduced Hermomie, Ginny, and Luna's role. This story is like better in my opinion that Half Blood Prince and the Deathly Hallows together because you give the three girls a great amount of development and you actually KILL people!! But I have one question! I would really like to borrow one of your quotes that Mr. Lovegood says and quote your name, but I would like to know if your okay with that and how would you like to be referenced? I was going to put it on Facebook if your okay with that? Btw your BLOODY BRILLIANT!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like the stories :)

I had the same unhappy feelings after reading the last two books (though I started writing RoM before HBP came out) and even stopped writing my FF stories after DH because I had become uninspired and was no longer a fan of the series. I still haven't watched the movies of the last two books and they remain the only two in the collection that I've never reread. Between finding out that years later people were still reviewing RoM and wanting me to continue and deciding to write an ending more to my liking, I went on and now am in the middle of the runaway train that is CoW.

As to the quote, I have no issue with it... my real name is Kris Williamson and be sure to quote the story and site so people come take a read ;) I have a public FB page if you'd like to check it out and like it, I'm putting in the address completely spelled out because we can't put links in comments. In addition to writing, I also make movies, act and model so besides the technical difficulties I'm currently having with the site, there may be extended periods where I don't have time to update the FF... But I will see it through to the end no matter how long it takes so bear with me and hopefully we'll wind up with a great story. www(dot)facebook(dot)com(slash)pages(slash)Kris-Williamson(slash)443820389044174?ref=hl

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Review #22, by ickle The Ministry of Magic

7th December 2013:
Wow I've read a lot of fanfics that involve the will of Sirius, and this is probably the best one yet, I nearly cried myself! very good, quality writing

Author's Response: Thank you... it broke my heart when I read OotP as I very much liked Sirius's character, but he may just pop back up in my stories so keep on reading ;)

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Review #23, by ickle Good News, Bad News and O.W.L's

7th December 2013:
Absolutely loving the story so far!! the characterizations are on point, most important for any fanfic! onward

Author's Response: Thank you, I tried to keep them all as I remembered them in the books... at least in the beginning. Eventually I'll make them my own in the version of their world I created out of what Rowling laid out, but even then, I tried to keep who they were at their core in mind. Hope you continue to like the stories :) Happy reading!

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Review #24, by Teddy Shopping in Knockturn Alley

28th October 2013:
I love your character development of Luna. I always thought she should have played a bigger part in the series.
I'm usually not a big fan of Harry/Hermione pairing, but I must admit it really works in your story.

Author's Response: I always liked Luna and when I started this story back in like 2004 or something like that, I was a total H/Hr fan (HBP and DH hadn't come out yet and so I hadn't yet lost faith in the series)... regardless, as I continued writing the fanfics, my opinion on H/Hr relationship changed as you'll see when you keep reading- but I never exactly saw R/Hr or H/G as making sense so suffice to say, the relationships took on a life of their own as I wrote... Nothing here is planned as my writing style is to sit down and write each chapter as it comes to me :) Hope you continue to enjoy it!

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Review #25, by Teddy Discoveries

27th October 2013:
I really love this story. I like stories where Harry lets his friends help him more than in the HP series, where it is just Ron and Hermione. And to be honest,I think those eight students would be a rather legendary gang in Hogwarts!
I like your style. You can keep readers interested, which isn't an easy thing to do. I'm really curious about the mind thing with Luna and Dumbledore, so I'm gonna start reading again!


Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you for the compliments on my writing style and trust me, there is a lot more to come here and especially in the sequel ;)

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