I didn't really understand that so I'm not sure how I can rate it. I liked the beginning though.

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That was lovely. I never realized how similar Harry and Neville are. It was by far the best Neville fanfiction I have ever read.

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this is a really good story oh my god i was really absorbed in it. it is really really brilliant. KF

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That was beautiful. How do you write like that? It was... amazing, I think I am going to cry.
This story touched my heart.
You just put into perspective how not bad my day actually was. Thank you.
L. Liano

Author's Response: Wow, thank you =). I am flattered this piece touched you so, and so pleased that you took the time to leave a review letting me know. Hope your days get better too.

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Wonderful. That's all I can say. Wonderful. How did you come up with this idea/POV? It seems so different than the usual contemplative angst one-shot.
100/10
Death That Walks

Author's Response: Thank you veyr much, and I really can't remember where the inspiration for this came from. I've always loved Neville, and know I wanted to write something on him, so I guess it just kind of grew from there. =)

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I just want you to know that is the single greatest piece of writing I have ever read. It was unbelievable, and left me close to tears. That was amazing.
Prophet
smasher2002@gmail.com

Author's Response: All I can really say is thank you, thank you very much. You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me =)

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This is an excellent one-shot. It made me realize how hard Harry's job of hero being an hero is and how easily he can fail; I loved the section where you show what it would be like if Neville had been chosen and Neville's absolute relief that it had been Harry and not him. Brillant writing.

Author's Response: I am so pleased to know you enjoyed this piece. It was one of my first one shots, and is kind of special to me. That and I love Neville so much, he is one of my favourite characters to write. Thank you for reviewing =)

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That was really deep, but a little confusing as it was like Harry was talking about some of it. Was it all Neville?

Author's Response: Yes, it was all Neville. This was actually the first one shot I wrote, so it's a little rougher and less well formed than my more recent ones. I think Neville and Harry share a lot of simliarities, which may be why some bits seemed confusing. Thank you for the review!

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Once again that was great, it put things in a new perspective for me. really made me think and realise how tough harry's job is. kudos for saying it through neville

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it from Neville's perspective. I always thought that out of everyone, he had the potential to understand the most. Thank you for reviewing!

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Briliant....

Author's Response: Thank you

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Wow. That was very philosophical and once again had a gloomy mood to it. Mysterious as well.

Author's Response: Thankyou for your kind comments.

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This was written so beautifully, I don't really know what to say. You are definitely a talented write. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thankyou for the lovely review.

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It is still so hard for me to reveiw you. I never really know what to say. Your creavity continues to amaze me, Your understanding of darkness impresses me. I must wonder if you write more then just fan fiction and if so where I could find it. I would love to read a story that was your own completly.

Author's Response: I'm afraid fanfiction is my limit at the moment, although I may one day expand into something truly original. Iguess it's just waiting for that inspiration to hit though. Thankyou for this and all you reviews, they are greatly appreciated.

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i was sure i had already reviewed this but when i checked i couldn't find it... so i suppose i haven't then :/ about time i do it now! this was a really good fic, like all of your stories, and i'm kind of disappointed you didn't win... there is just something about your writing that makes it so special. great work and keep the fics coming!

Author's Response: Thankyou, and I will...there is a brand new one on the way as we speak.....

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argh, i can't handle how good a writer you are! it blows my mind, i can see why this placed second in the competion. I can't wait for you to update!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, although unfortunately this piece didn't place at all.

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your work is so emotional to read and a pleasure every time. i loved it

Author's Response: Aw, thank you *blushes*

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Really beautiful. Write more please!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I will.

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