Hmm... interesting idea all of your chapters, but I dont think there is enough feeling behind it. If you truly want to write about the emotions behind a character then you need to step into their shoes and walk a mile. Try it and maybe your entries will improve...

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please read and review my stories! especially \"Broken\" and \"Now That I Have You\"! THANX!!!!!!!!!

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again COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;otza love, shelby p.s please read and review \"Broken\". THANX!!!!!!!

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oh dear I think I\'ve been scarred for life lol

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COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lotza love, shelby xoxo p.s read my story \"Broken\". it would mean a lot! THANX!

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ok one word..... enteresting

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seriously? y doesny anyone read this story? lol well this chapter was pretty good but it would be better if you could write a bit more and make it more detailed. yeah well keep up the good work! and pleaaaaaasee continue!! bah bye xoxo

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this is a realli gud story... keep it up.. and if u have the time u dhould read my story _SeX iS a DiRtY wOrD_ just look up my name in the auther directory cya hunni p.s write sum more of ur story

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Omg am I like the only one that is reviewing this story??? Well this deserves more than one reiview!! I love it!! Its so cute to see what they are all thinking I think it’s a great idea what you have done and please continue maybe you could tell me what snapes thoughts are? I bet its something evil!! Mwhahaha

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Hey this is pretty good!!! I like it!! please write more I want to know draco’s thoughts! Hehehe I bet its sumthing naughty about ginny!! Well I hope it is! Haha if u have the time could u please read and review my story secret love I would really appreciate it!!

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