3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ina otaku The Quick Departure

30th July 2003:
please update soon!!!!!! this cool!

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Review #2, by Anon The Quick Departure

21st February 2003:
its a good story, it can be confusing at times to understand who is talking, also use lines in between paragraphs as having it just in a block made my eyes hurt, but i liked your story so please post again. Amber Grant Ps- if you have time plz check out my fic Harry potter and the ghosts from the past

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Review #3, by HermioneGranger The Quick Departure

26th January 2003:
Good work! I only have one correction-split up you paragraphs, but that's all!

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