It sounds great so far! Report Review
HEY WHY IN HELLS NAME DID YOU ABANDED THIS STORY!! it rocks! Report Review
That was crap Report Review
that was really sad! LILY CANNOT DIE!! Report Review
WTF?!?! how DARE you leave us hanging like that?!?!?! EVIL PERSON UPDATE!!!!!! ^_^ lol its great update soon Report Review
That was all over the fricken place! I don't know what THOSE people were reading << BTW You just like killed Harry Potter. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO JKR!? You just like, don't respect the fact she's taken 15+ years to write 6 novels (and one to still be released) and you just like killed her work with one little stunt. Oh, and if you're going to write a one-hit-wonder, atleast make it a little bit longer << My stories that I write are 6 times the length of that, and that's per chapter. Don't get me wrong, you're a good writer, just your story has no.. background. So I couldn't get into the mood. Like one minute, she's at class running away, twenty words later it's dinner, 15 words later it's after dinner, and thirty words after that Lily's dead. Keep practicing your writing skills, when it's improved, I wil promise you to bite my tongue and appologise for this... creative response. 'Till then ~ Boosyboy Report Review
how can you b so evil as to leave a CLIFFIE like that? your EVIL you MUST UPDATE! THATS AN ORDER!!!! MUST UPDATE!! MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST UPDATE!!!! I'll go CRAZY if you don't! c'mon, make James go save Lily! Report Review
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
Wow. Poor Lily - how can this be a Lily/James fic if Lily's...well, dead? Anyway, update soon, now you've got me wondering! Report Review
Okay... Is this story a kind of a short story? Because you seems to go very fast with it. I mean, the insidens seem to run away. Report Review
Oh my God, poor James, to have to see that!! Keep going, that was really good!!! Report Review
Please write more. Your story is awsome! Report Review
Oh, you\'re nice, leavin us hanging like that Report Review
come on you can\'t leave us like that come on,wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeee,
a.k.a padfoot Report Review
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVIL, EVIL! YOU BADDIE! SHOULD CALL YOU DEATH EATER, YOU\'RE SO MEAN!!!! BAD CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did I call you a Death Eater? Oops. When will you post? Report Review
That was good
But theres only one chapter!!!!!!
You gotta write more!!
what happens next!!??????
omg *blink blink* don\'t tell me thats the end of the story....-
COME ON JAMES ACCIO BROOMSTICK, NOW GO SAVE HER!!!!!! LOL Report Review
Hey you have to write more soon PLZ. It's soooo good! Report Review
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