hey - this is pretty interesting. it's a short story, but i still like it... keep up with the good work! and pleaz paragraph it better so it's easier to tell when ur describing something to when someone's talking... not trying to be mean, just some constructive critisism... (spelling? lol...) numb with pain

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I love ur story keep finishing it! Are u canadian

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hey ... that's pretty good ... i like it ... kinda weird ... but good ... please write more!!!!

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hey, i jus wanna know, why does harry like cloe, i mean, no real conection there? well, i like it meh frend from about a year ago and still freend, keep going.

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hey, i jus wanna know, why does harry like cloe, i mean, no real conection there? well, i like it meh frend from about a year ago and still freend, keep going.

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hey, i jus wanna know, why does harry like cloe, i mean, no real conection there? well, i like it meh frend from about a year ago and still freend, keep going.

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Is this going to be something like she gets every boy, sounds cool ;p see ya, lithing

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nnnnnnnnnoooooooo!! MAKE SURE HARRY IS OK PLZ AND THX LIS! MUHAHAH *CRIES AND LAFFS*

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Grr, Chloe is such a player!!

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Awwwwwwwwwww,it's cute. Write more. ~ * Fox * ~

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Its good,but I make no sense of the fact that Harry looks like hes about to date a younger person....

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I think it's cute. Even though I love Harry and Hermione fics, this is one fic I like. Write more soon. ~ * Fox * ~

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