plsplsplsplsplspls..!get on w/ da story. da ritings' pretty good but u might wanna check ur punctuation and grammar. good luck continuing. is spike or xander gonna appear in da story at all? or hav u simply abandoned it completely? i hope its no the latter!

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plz hurryup this story is brill !!!!

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VERY COOL!PLEASE WRITE MORE!AND PLEASE READ SOME OF MINE!

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I absolutely love your story, such a good idea!!!!!!! Can\'t wait to hear more, when you can, of course but again wonderful wonderful story!!!! (\",)

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This is a good story so far. Lis-10, I know what it\'s like to be in trouble 4 somthing you didn\'t do. I also know about the big phone bills. My sympathies for the unfair punishment. Write more as soon as you can. I don\'t mind a delay. I\'ll read your story through to the end. Good luck and byes, Maya

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P.S. Don\'t appoligize for anything! If they don\'t like it it\'s their own damn fault!

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Why are you apologizing for nastiness? Isn\'t life full of it anyway? No need to apologize... It\'s just there, as you meant it to be. In fact the better stories are usually the ones where there\'s a lot of crazy, unpredicatable, frustrating, sad, depressing stuff goes on.. IF all stories were happy... They\'d be pretty boring. In fact every story has to have a challenge (the more life threatening, depressing, challenging and life-altering the better). Otherwise... what\'s the point.. no one would care.. I actually like the fact that you made Herminoe come from a broken home. It makes her story (and yours) interesting.. I mean if she was a happy-go-lucky little nerd, she would not be the coolest wizzard on the planet...

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End Parental Oppression!!! DAmn internet is expensive in Eruope.. £190!!! a month!!! Ouch.. I hope that\'s not dial-up... I pay $44.95/mo.. unlimited high speed, baby.. woot woot.. We gotta get internet cheaper for you guys and cheaper cell phone service here in the good ol\' US of Ahhh. WAnna trade?? CEll phone service here sucks and is mad mad expensive.. Looks like a text editor is your answer. Write the stories there and then upload them... or just copy and paste... take a quick look at a story or review... copy the text... paste... read later... Perhaps if Mommy\'s bills go down you can write more stories....Or don\'t use a service that charges by the minute... ouch... C.

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Ha! Fred & George serious? Wow. Anyway, please work on your grammar. The story is quite hard to read at times.

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WRITE MORE!!!!!!! FOR HEAVENS SAKE DONT LEAVE ME WAITING!!!!!

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YAY!!!!!!!! A story that mixes Buffy and Harry Potter!!!!!!!! Good idea!!! Its awesome how Hermione's watcher is a librarian JUST LIKE GILES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Totally good job!!!!!

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Oh..This is pretty talented in discription and writing.I want the second chapter!!

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Pretty good!Keep going!

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