amazingly well written, and pretty hilarious! i loved your use of metaphors and similes (ex: "Madam Pomfrey herself had a nose that ran like the Thames"...nice one!) and the ending was perfect. my favorite lines were..." Everything fell silent, and Harry raised his eyebrows at Ron as Hermione put on her "I'm-going-to-find-out-exactly-what's-wrong-here-and-look-really-clever" face. Ron returned the gesture. "Here we go a-bloody-gain" he said under his breath.
"Shut up Ron, can't you see I'm thinking?" said Hermione, scathingly, briefly using her "I'll-hex-your-underwear-if-you're-not-careful" look." ....great story. Report Review
Going to be a good one Muzza.
just like hermione............
i loved the story it was funny
haha! That was unusual... but nevertheless quite amusing!! Keep it up, you are a very good writer!! Report Review
After I heard how hilarious you were in the chat room, I thought that you story should be too... Really funny!! Loved it! Report Review
ADefinately a different Fan-fic but entertaining. Thank you for reccommending my Fiction! Report Review
I am confused, but this is funny keep goin! Report Review
I love it see how I am clapping? *Is clapping vcry loud* See? thats how much I love it!!! Report Review
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