{reviewid: 321253, reviewer: 'black'}
5th January 2005:
Punctuation my der friend it helps alot
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{reviewid: 156577, reviewer: 'Lindsey'}
21st May 2004:
AAAWWWWWW I love it write more soon
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{reviewid: 35479, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
2nd January 2003:
I love it!
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{reviewid: 35418, reviewer: 'Brat'}
2nd January 2003:
it sounds interesting but i think you should make the first chapter longer. actually i would be very happy to beta it for you. A little advice is watching some of the little spelling and grammer.
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{reviewid: 35417, reviewer: 'Brat'}
2nd January 2003:
it sounds interesting but i think you should make the first chapter longer. actually i would be very happy to beta it for you. A little advice is watching some of the little spelling and grammer.
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{reviewid: 35416, reviewer: 'Brat'}
2nd January 2003:
it sounds interesting but i think you should make the first chapter longer. actually i would be very happy to beta it for you. A little advice is watching some of the little spelling and grammer.
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{reviewid: 35415, reviewer: 'Brat'}
2nd January 2003:
it sounds interesting but i think you should make the first chapter longer. actually i would be very happy to beta it for you. A little advice is watching some of the little spelling and grammer.
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{reviewid: 35362, reviewer: 'MonicaDawson'}
1st January 2003:
you must have had nothing to do
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{reviewid: 35334, reviewer: 'vixen'}
1st January 2003:
its good, continue and i will def. read it THX!!!!
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{reviewid: 35330, reviewer: 'xfilefan'}
1st January 2003:
interesting...... Hermione drunk... not something everyone writes about.
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