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Review #1, by Anonymous Survivor's Guilt Part II

24th April 2017:
I think you have a good story here. I enjoy the plot line and your vision, admire it really. The story does move a little fast though, like you're rushing to write the words. I can understand that, but personally suggest you take your time with the finer details of your plot and move slower. Quality, not quantity.

Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestion. This story started out as a exercise in writing more concisely and I realized that 1k words per chapter was not enough for me. I'm just not good at it. I plowed through anyway, hoping that practice would make it better but I am afraid it is too disjointed. I am going to rework my newer chapters and see how that goes and try not to neurotically care about the word count.

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Review #2, by Stgoody Survivor's Guilt Part II

23rd April 2017:
I love this story but I am ready for some Draco and Hermione.

Author's Response: Noted. I will make sure of that in the next chapter.

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Review #3, by Stgoody What is a life worth?

6th April 2017:
I love this story, I hate that he has to look like a young Tom Riddle when Draco is such an amazing looking man. I also appreciate how fast you post.

Author's Response: Hi!
It's a shame that having Riddle's face affords Draco the anonymity that he needs. Hermione is completely repulsed by his disguise. Good thing he doesn't have to always be in character. Poor Draco.
I have finished writing the story and I send in a new chapter as soon as the Mods validate. :)
I am glad you are enjoying it and I hope you continue to like it.
-Jessiy


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Review #4, by Stgoody Shifting Tides

29th March 2017:
I forgot to rate this story yesterday with my review

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to come back :)

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Review #5, by Panacea Shifting Tides

28th March 2017:
Absolutely loving!! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #6, by magnifique11 The Modern Don Quixote

26th March 2017:
I think it's a really interesting idea to have Dennis seeking revenge! He's an easily forgotten character but I think it's completely believable that he would almost turn into a vigilante-type character after the war, (and especially with the wizarding world crash you've set up).

Author's Response: That's exactly why I chose him. He had motive, opportunity, and enough skill to make it plausible. He also wasn't a prominent character. I could see a nice kid being led astray by his sense of justice and need to prove himself.
-Jessiy


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Review #7, by Panacea Pavlovian Conditioning

22nd March 2017:
Great idea!! I'm really enjoying this !

Author's Response: Thank you! I am actually nearly finished writing the whole thing. Every time I get validated, I immediately send another chapter in. I hope you continue to like it!
-Jessiy


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