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Review #1, by blackzero ...of a negotiation

18th April 2017:
The chapter was extremely good.Fake girlfriend with opposing ego...that's brand new...Please make Albus a less looser tyoe...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you enjoyed the story. Albus is...strained but you'll see him loosen up in future chapters. Not entirely but a bit.

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Review #2, by Giu9_RedandGold ...of a negotiation

17th April 2017:
I really enjoied reading this. The "fake relationship" plot is something I've read many times, but this feels different and new. I still can't say that I like Albus because, let's face it...so far he is quite unlikeable. But I think it's meant to be this way and I'm sure his journey has yet to begin, so I'v still got time to warm up to him. On the other hand, I really like both Piper and Lenore. And their relationship. They are basically polar opposites and are fun to read especially together!

Looking forward to read more ;)

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying my little story. Albus is...a lot to handle. I know. I wouldn't decide if I dislike him just yet. I think he has some redeemable qualities. I love Piper and Lenore too! They are complete opposites but they can really rallying together.

Thanks so much for the review hope to hear from you again. :D


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Review #3, by nervouspace On The Brink (of a nervous breakdown)

8th April 2017:
"If anything it's more about Albus coming to terms with adulthood, reality and just life in general." sign me up tbh
i like your writing but i suck at commenting; all i can say is i'm excited to read more and meet everybody!!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for the review. I honestly didn't think anyone was going to click and read my little story. I have a LOT planned for this guy here. Albus is going to take you through a whirlwind of emotions. I'm excited to have you read some more! Thanks so much for the review. :D

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