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Review #1, by AbraxanUnicorn Italian Princess

28th February 2017:
Ooh, it's hotting up!

I'm not surprised Lina hates James if that's how he treated her at school :( but OMG, Lina had a close shave there! Yikes

Can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store :)

Brax X

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Review #2, by AbraxanUnicorn Russia

23rd February 2017:
Ooh, I can almost feel the danger in this story! I think what helps with that is the location :)

I can't wait to read more about what happens between James and Lina, especially now they have been thrown into this situation together.

I have to admire your versatility as an author; this is so very different to your other story :)

Enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

Brax X

Author's Response: Thanks :) it's really hard to write something so serious but I thought I'd give it a try.

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Review #3, by AbraxanUnicorn New Information

19th February 2017:
Hello! Thought I'd check out your new work :) What a great first chapter and I'm quite excited at the thought of where you're going to take this story :) Already, there are interesting dynamics between the introductory characters, but I do want to know - what on earth did James do to Adelina at school?!

I really admire your ability to juggle several writing projects at once :) I'm off to catch up with one of your other ones now :)

Brax X

Author's Response: Thanks for the review:) I'm glad you like it so far and I'm already working on the second chapter. I'll be updating one of my other stories first however. Keep reading :)

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