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Review #1, by Siriusly21 New Friends, New Problems

21st March 2017:
Hey, I like your story and the premise! I liked how Rose and Scorpius wanted to be friends, but their parents pulled them apart. I feel like everything is bit rushed, though, like how the Weasleys happen to be walking to the street that the Malfoys are on. I also felt like Hermione is a bit more tolerant and wouldn't call a 2 year old a demon. Anyways, it's a good start but I wish there was a bit more transition from scene to scene.

Author's Response: Thx for the advice

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