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Review #1, by krazyboutharryginny First Year

13th April 2017:
Jailbreak!

Aw, this was so sweet! I haven't read much about Colin Creevey, and I definitely have never read any Colin/Luna fics. But honestly you made it very believable! This story was so short but I was smiling pretty much the entire time.

I really loved the scene with Alicia Bell talking to Colin about photography. I just always like scenes where an older student is genuinely kind to a younger student, and also Colin was so excited about the potion and it was so cute.

And aw, that last paragraph is so wonderful. It created such a vivid mental picture and you used such gorgeous language.

Honestly your language use throughout this whole piece is really great. Everything about this story, aside from being very sweet, was kind of... I'm not sure how to describe it besides maybe playful? It was just very light and had kind of a dreamy quality to it.

Even though this was short it was really enjoyable and managed to make me feel all gooey and sappy about a pairing that I'd never even considered before, so kudos to you! And I think you did a really good job with Colin.

Fantastic work!

-Kayla

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Review #2, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap First Year

13th April 2017:
Her hair is the color of sunshine.

Uh!!! Way to make me melt. I am a puddle. This was magnificent. I love how innocent they are here. First of all Colin and his camera, gushing, makes me swoon. I just loved the initial interaction. You captured Luna's character, her entire heart and soul in the beginning and in the end. It was just all so very innocent. The shoes off, the way they're relaxed around each other, the way he isn't put off by the fact that she has her magazine upside down. Normally I'd find it strange if someone asked if they could take my picture. If he asked someone else like Hermione or Ginny I'd be a bit put off and expect them to say no. But Luna is that breath of fresh air that is willing to go head first into the unknown and make someone's day. Then you switch to him taking photos of really his favorite subject, Harry, and everything sounds whimsical. It sounds nice the way he's there snapping away and yeah maybe Oliver doesn't want him there but he didn't say an outright no. Then when Bell came into the picture, well the story, and said he could make his photos come alive! It's just a sweet gesture that a sweet boy deserves. The end was my favorite though. In so few words you were able to capture the essence of Luna. I think he would look at that photo fondly. The pure perfection of a girl who isn't perfect and isn't trying to be. Ah, excellent job!

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Review #3, by Secret Valenpuff First Year

28th February 2017:
This story has no reviews or love that I can see! So your Secret Valenpuff is here to fix that!

First up, I freaking love Colin.

I have never ever thought of them as a pairing before (who has?!) but now that it has come to my attention, I ship them so hard. They seem like cute little outcasts (I don't actually know if Colin is, but that's kind of how I see him) who could be the best of friends. There would never be a dull moment between them!

I love that Colin chooses to ignore implied social warnings. He's an opportunist, if nothing else.

Renee, this is cute! I'd love to see more of them actually interacting, because instead all I'm thinking about is Colin following her around like a little puppy dog (which is still adorable)

The first letter to spell out the last word in the sentence is: L

Love Valenpuff ♥

Author's Response: Well I'm definitely just now seeing these reviews but thank you so much Bianca! Er. secret unknown Valenpuff person. :P

I really want to finish this story bcs I ship them so hard too! I agree with you that they have this mutual oddity about them that can't be anything but fascinating, you know?

All the letter hints here would've been quite helpful haha

Thank you so much again *hug*
xoxo Renee


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