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Review #1, by leta/newt story is incredibly good! The Forest at Midnight

9th February 2017:
Wow, this chapter was amazing. I love this story, if you could keep updating as fast as you can it would be great. It would also be great if you guys didn't forget about this story/stop writing it.

This chapter was definetley the best. I'd prefer to see more leta and newt action next chapter.

Thanks

Author's Response: Hello :)
Thank you so much! We definitely haven't forgotten about it and we never will :D we've planned the ending and everything, but we're kinda busy with stuff and life :/ so updates might not be as quick as they previously were.
Thanks for the review!
-LilyLuna1227 (aka lovegood27 and hedwig1751)


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Review #2, by victoria_anne First Impressions

23rd January 2017:
HELLO HELLO!

It's oh so lovely to meet you. This story calls to me for so many reasons. First, that there's no reviews on it *cries* MUST FIX.
Second, that there's a Slytherin and Hufflepuff relationship, and if there's one thing you need to know about me, it's that I LIVE for Slytherpuff love (srsly, I have a novel based around one). Third, Newt and Leta. Now there's something I'm interested in.

Phew, that was a long review intro. Anyway.

I love how straight up Newt is the Newt we know and love, even at 11 years old. He sticks out like a troll at a fairy party. Seriously, the clumsiness, the absentmindedness, the notfittinginness. It's perfectness.

Ah, and Leta. Mysterious Leta. I love the fact that you have her experiencing notfittinginness as well. (Was that in the movie? I can't remember) She and Newt have that in common and I can't wait for them to bond over that and their mutual love of animals! The relationship between her and her twin sister is an interesting one too. Can't wait to see how that develops throughout the story.

Aww little Newt just wanting a friend tugs at my heart! ♥

The parallels between Newt and Leta's experiences is so great. I think the only criticism I would have about it is that Slytherin House is written rather shallowly and in-your-face-evil, but plenty of others do it too, and it does serve to emphasise how Leta doesn't quite fit in.

All in all, great opening chapter. Tiny baby Newt is someone I just want to carry around in my pocket. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see you around! :D



Author's Response: Hello! :D

First of all I'M SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *hangs head in shame*
Second THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING! I am in your enternal debt forever :)

I wanted to make the fact that Newt and Leta could never fit in to be a really important theme, since it's what brings them together in the end.

Sorry about making the Slytherins so shallow! I'll try my best to change it, but my goal was to highlight how Leta never and could never fit in, especially because of Lyla.

Aww tiny little cinnamon roll Newt

~LilyLuna1227 (AKA lovegood27 & hedwig1751)


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