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Review #1, by DougA The Goodbye

31st December 2016:
Excellent. All of the interplay between the characters was well done. I am a little surprised that you didn't have some contact between Dobby and Harry, and Dumbledore giving the couple his advice, but that was more than made for by Ginny channeling her inner Lilly, and cowering James and Snuffles. All in all, well done, and much too good of a story to have not had any reviews until now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I'm a huge Marauder fan - this story is a one time thing only. So naturally, I added as much of the Marauders and Lily as I could ;)
Please check out my Marauders Era novel if you like the Marauders!
Happy reading! :D


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Review #2, by DougA The Ceremony

30th December 2016:
Good job. Ginny having to tell Lilly about Harry is funny, as is the deciding of who should have given Harry " the Talk". James and Sirius's fear of Lilly is funny, as is the beat down of Sirius. The build up to the wedding is excellent.

Author's Response: Thank for the review!
Happy reading! :D And do keep reviewing!


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Review #3, by DougA The Call

30th December 2016:
Very interesting premise. I like Harry's reaction to being back in the forest, and Ginny's support of him, along with her dealings with Ron and Hermione.

Harry and Ginny not being able to see each other is cute, as is Fred's ratting out Ron for using the cloak. The actions/thoughts of the returned play well, as does Harry and Ginny's interaction with them.

Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Happy reading! :D And do keep reviewing!


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