Reading Reviews for A Look in the Lives
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by BlueJay Chapter 3

27th December 2016:
This is a great story, Please do an update. I love this story, Though when does Lily's life starts showcasing

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your read and review! I will be updating quite soon, so please stay tuned! :)

Don't worry - Lily develops more as a character in Chapters 4 & 5, and then her character gets quite a bit of "screen time" (page time?) after chapter 10-ish. I've currently written up to chapter 16, and Lily has a starring role in that area of the fic. I'm really fond of the voice I've given her, so I hope you'll enjoy reading from her POV soon.

Thanks again for the review, and I look forward to what you think of upcoming chapters!

-RP/kate


 Report Review

Review #2, by Ohpl Chapter 1

7th November 2016:
Fabulous start. Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you'll check back for Chapter 2. :) Thanks for the read & review! -Kate/rp

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login