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Review #1, by quill2parchment Support

18th January 2017:
Im sorry I called you a trollop.

You didnt.

In my head, love.

I literally laughed out loud. I love this story so much! You've done such a fantastic job! Okay...I'll keep reading now.

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Review #2, by quill2parchment Detention

17th January 2017:
Chapter six has to be my favorite chapter so far! I don't even know where to start!

First of all, I love the way your story just flows. It doesn't feel forced at any point which is nice and makes for an easy reading.

There's a lot of different characters here. It's hard to write a scene where you have to constantly keep tabs on where all your characters are at. Yet you were very fair in awarding them time. Of course, Andie and Sirius took center stage but it was understood that they were a part of a larger group.

Your characters also feel real. Xander is interesting! He's respectful enough to make sure Andie is okay before kissing her but then he brings of Joanne which was heartbreaking... But then so does James, and it makes the whole thing more interesting. We are suddenly reminded that it isn't about Slytherin vs Gryffindor... It's just two boys who were feeling humiliated and chose to be cruel.

I'll definitely keep reading. I just need to stop by and let you know how much I loved this chapter!

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Review #3, by Cammon  Delicate

11th October 2016:
This is so tragically cute-- but also a bit sad. But I really like it!

I'm going to continue reading now :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the support!

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Review #4, by Cammon  Depulsio

6th October 2016:
This is very cute-- Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #5, by Potterhead1994 Support

5th October 2016:
Absolutely love how well you're doing! You're a great writer. I'm very curious to see where this is going. Keep at it!

Author's Response: I'm curious too! Let's find out, shall we?

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Review #6, by Potterhead1994 Learn

26th July 2016:
Great story so far !! Completely reeled me in. I'm excited for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I can keep you hooked!

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