7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by dumbledore_wannabe Ministerial Magic

13th January 2017:
Love the way you thought about redesigning the whole Ministry and the details of accomplishing it. Very imaginative and original!

Author's Response: Dumbledore_Wannabe,

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. I'm playing with the mind-side of magic, thinking what would "real" magic be, and proposing it would be effected by mind and wand.

Bill


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Review #2, by dumbledore_wannabe A Sense of Relief

30th December 2016:
I'm always happy whenever you post, and I'm interested to see where this story is going! Hope everyone in your family is okay now. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Dumbledor_wannabe,

We're as good as can be expected, thank you. Getting old takes some work.

I'm honestly not sure about the pace for revealing the mystery. Hopefully, it is not too slow. The reveal is a few chapters down the road and the resolution won't come until the end.

Bill


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Review #3, by ppn1958 A Lovers' Morning

3rd August 2016:
I am loving this story! Please hurry up and update!😀😀😀

Author's Response: ppn1958,

I should have a new chapter posted by this weekend, thank you for your kind review!

Bill


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Review #4, by Michael Bell Pizza and Bunny Slippers

13th June 2016:
First, welcome back. It is wonderful to have your vision in another story. I am enjoying the start. A little more opening exposition that I might expect, but you do have to write backwards and forwards for a bit and I recognize that. What appealed to me most in the Chinese Book was your skill with dialogue. You have the voices down and that is a great thing. Cannot wait for more. Well I can and will, but thanks for taking on another story line.

Author's Response: Michael,

Thank you for taking the time to write. You're right, of course, I do need to wander about the scenery before I can get going. In the case of “Grand Trine,” where I am trying to bring a story out of the day-to-day mundane, Grimmauld Place seemed like another character. As that it let me play with ideas like “magical space," the magic of transforming it.

There'll be lots of dialog starting with Touch & Talk the chapter I just posted. I've paid a lot of attention to the phrases introducing dialog as chances to shade the emotional content.

Thank you,all the chapters are written, I'll post them as I get the proofing a bit better. I hope not to disappoint.

Bill


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Review #5, by dumbledore_wannabe Pizza and Bunny Slippers

3rd June 2016:
Oh, how wonderful, you are back with a new story!! Can't wait to see where it goes. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm a bit behind in posting, hope to get there this weekend. It is planting time where I live and the garden is getting all the attention.

Bill


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Review #6, by annimal16 Prologue: Number Twelve Grimmauld Place

28th April 2016:
Im so exited you finaly posted this story.
Loved the last story. Amd im stoked for this one!

Author's Response: annimal16,

This is more mystery and character-based than "Chinese Book," so I hope it doesn't move too slow. More detail of Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione's day-to-day magical lives, less action.

Bill



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Review #7, by kayt Prologue: Number Twelve Grimmauld Place

28th April 2016:
Glad to see s new story from you as I loved the Chinese Book. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: kayt,

I'll say the same as I did to annimal16, there's more mystery and detail of Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione's day-to-day magical lives, less action than "Chinese Book."

Bill


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