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Review #1, by ravenclaw_princess The First Flame

13th December 2015:
Merry Christmas. Here is a give for the Ravenclaw gift exchange.

This is super cute and an awesome concept as well. I had to giggle a little bit when Harry was a police officer.and that he was in a coffee shop.with doughnuts. Yes, kind of cliched, but hilarious. And him being a police officer...and now detective, is very comparable to him in the wizarding world.

And again, Ginny falls into a natural roll as being a reporter. Her personality suits this as she was never one to back down from a fight and I'm sure she would do everything she could to get a story.

Harry's awkwardness around girls really comes through here, what with brushing the crumbs off of himself and then his unintentionally suggestive comments and his blushing. Ginny, as usual, had to take control of the situation.

I saw one small error
"There were a few people he didn't recognize, and one he didn't." The last didn't should be did.

This is pretty cool and I will definitely pop back to see what other ideas you come up with. Its well written and I you have mirrored the wizarding world with the muggle world really well.


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Review #2, by cherry_pop94 The First Flame

12th December 2015:
Hello Olivia!

I'm here for the gift thread in the common room. I love muggle AUs and this one was so cute! The coffee shop - cliched, but for a good reason! It's never not adorable.

I love how Harry's a detective and Ginny's a journalist. She's so forward and confident and he's so awkward and shy. I could just imagine awkward Harry getting doughnut crumbs all over him and fumbling over his words as Ginny smoothly flirts.

Thanks for sharing this fun story! I can't wait to read more of these!

Happy Holidays!


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Review #3, by princesslily_36 The First Flame

28th November 2015:

I suddenly remembered that one of my title suggestions were taken up by you and I wanted to come along and check it out.

I loved your first chapter and hope you'll write more. Harry and Ginny in a muggle AU is really fun to read. I wonder if you'll continue with them or represent a new set of characters in each chapter.

Waiting to read what you come up with next.


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